Prelude to a kiss

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From 1998 to 2012, Luhan and Minseok have a lot of time to fall in and out of love.

 

 

 

 

So this was the fic I wrote for Luminfics contest. Luckily it was first place, so if any voter comes across this, thank you so much!

Betaed by the awesome Shiningrose

 

Warnings: it's not rated because there's no /violence, but be aware that there are some mentions of and drugs.

Foreword

Luhan was mad, because Minseok was too different, too grown up, and he had no ideahow maintain his self-control. Minseok was all deep, sensual eyes, tempting pupils that dilated while staring, lips that stretched with an indecent hint. He ignited a carnal sense within Luhan, and Luhan hated it. He had never been so far from having Minseok, never so impatient for taking him.
 

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xiu_mine #1
Chapter 2: Woah.. this one's a little dark and gloomy. I feel all the raw emotions and uncertainties and fears Xiuhan has felt althroughout the years they have been friends and strangers but at the same I feel realistically romantic which is strange cos it's contrasting in every sense but yeah. I'm am blabbering alot which is not making sense and this fic's charm got me hooked. A very interesting story and I am so happy by the end of it. Most of the pairings are unpopular but the main couple is my fave ship so everything else doesn't matter anymore
nicolebaozi #2
Chapter 2: HOLY CRAP. you writing is pretty good! You shoudlve warned me to anticipate a cascade of feeels which im currently drowned in. This fic had me emotional af. I love it. *applauds*
winterspringsummer #3
Chapter 2: This is beautiful. I felt the emotions, understood the characters. I can totally imagine Luhan and Minseok being like this in real life. It felt real. Loved their journey, since they met for the first time when they were kids and until they grew up. It was worth reading. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
purpleshell #4
I read this story last night at 1am and I had to bite my tongue and not scream, because this was so good I ASJHFKDSFJH I thought my heart was going to burst while I was reading. Everything felt so real and I feel like I could talk forever about this amazing story, but right now, I can't find any words. I have to compose myself omg. Anyways, you're an amazing writer and you definitely deserved the first place!!

Also VHope being spoiled rich brats with Baek ftw
EdXing #5
Chapter 2: GOD!!!! That was SO awesome. BRAVO!!!!
xiuknows #6
Good thing you won, you totally deserved it bc you broke my heart. Kudos!
MuchAdoeAbout #7
You were the gifted writer who wrote this pieace pf art?!?!? *falls onto knees and bows down* THIS WAS SOOOOOO ING GOOD IT ACTUALLY RIPPED MY HEART OUT SO MUCH PAIN IT WAS SO GOOD
congrats on winning btw!!! You deserve it
Lurkerderp #8
Chapter 2: Yayy they're finally together, but I feel so sad for yixing ;-;
He didn't deserve to be brought in this me.
Typical me feeling for a secondary character ;-; lol
Overall great story!!
-baymax #9
i watched the movie boyhood and then read this and oh my gosh, i read two things that have to do with growing up and this got me tearing up a lot more now
everything was perfectly fitted together and it made me feel like i was part of their lives.
congrats for winning first place, you deserved it :)
ixxxrene #10
Congratulations! <333
I bet you still remember me? xD

I was wondering why didn't I get a reply from you in LJ. Only few minutes back I went back to check, and I didn't post with my LJ acc (I'm ixxxrene everywhere but I didn't get notification when login with Twitter acc.) LJ kept giving me error while posting comments (even in other entries) so I had to try other method.

ALSO YOU WROTE KAIBAEK AND I DIDN'T KNOW. ofhaipfnfnO[F. It's been so long since I follow any story in AFF since I've been actively reading in LJ fic exchanges / fests. I've subscribed to your story and hopefully will read it soon! :)
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