Entry #17

Blue-inked Fingers
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Surrender

 

If you love someone, you should fight for them, right?

Grab on, hold on tight

Let go of your doubts

Just stay there and be by their side

 

That's my plan in this game that they call love

Stick with him, just be with him

Even if he pushes me away

Even if he's telling me to go away

 

He told me he didn't like me

Told me to not follow him around

I went and did it my way anyway

But then I saw that moment of him with her

 

Now I understand that saying that goes:

"If you love someone, set them free"

I didn't know it before

But now I fully understand

 

I will try to forget him

With shaking hands

With my breaking heart

I will try to let go of him

 

This is me giving up

Me giving him the chance to be with that girl that he likes

Me helping cupid and fate, making their job easier

To let two hearts beat as one

Even if it'll tear me apart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Raemi-ya #1
Chapter 10: wooaa~~ i like it >3<
Bookworm01
#2
Chapter 9: I only read your poems today (sorry, a bit busy). I think they're good but I see a few typos in some (like jem, instead of gem). I'm hoping you'll fix them. Anyway, I don't really care about typos but I just wanted to tell you, in case you wanted to correct them.
I felt your disappointment and frustration when you told us about BTS' concert in Manila and how you didn't get to go. That girl to whom your grandfather gave the ticket is very lucky. She received a F-R-E-E SVIP ticket! That's something. Well, at least you and your grandfather might have helped someone. Malay mo po, medyo gipit sa pera iyong babae na iyon at ang libreng ticket na yun ay nakatulong sa kanya. ;-)
SOSHIkath #3
Chapter 7: Daesung ba to?xD Short yet ramdam ko yung emotion mo. LOL. Hallo!
SOSHIkath #4
Chapter 4: read it. =)