Entry #10

Blue-inked Fingers
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                              I say

 

Taylor Swift said that loving you is red,

And that losing you is blue.

I say, loving you is a rainbow of colors,

And losing you is black and white.

 

Being with you is a world with red, and blue, and all.

A life without you is gray, and black, all shades, dull.

Loving you, just thinking of you, I'm all giddy, all smiles.

Losing you, just thinking of it, I'm all frowns, I always cry.

 

Loving you, I'm complete.

Losing you, I'm shattered.

Loving you, I'm alive.

Losing you, I'm dead, but I'll smile.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Raemi-ya #1
Chapter 10: wooaa~~ i like it >3<
Bookworm01
#2
Chapter 9: I only read your poems today (sorry, a bit busy). I think they're good but I see a few typos in some (like jem, instead of gem). I'm hoping you'll fix them. Anyway, I don't really care about typos but I just wanted to tell you, in case you wanted to correct them.
I felt your disappointment and frustration when you told us about BTS' concert in Manila and how you didn't get to go. That girl to whom your grandfather gave the ticket is very lucky. She received a F-R-E-E SVIP ticket! That's something. Well, at least you and your grandfather might have helped someone. Malay mo po, medyo gipit sa pera iyong babae na iyon at ang libreng ticket na yun ay nakatulong sa kanya. ;-)
SOSHIkath #3
Chapter 7: Daesung ba to?xD Short yet ramdam ko yung emotion mo. LOL. Hallo!
SOSHIkath #4
Chapter 4: read it. =)