Haunted

Enchantress
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The stench, dampness, slime, and darkness oppressed her and put her in a foul mood. She’d tried to clear away the dirk, bugs, and rats. She had managed to raise her makeshift bed with old wooden crates; she kept her possessions dry, clean, by placing them within metal boxes. The squeaking of rats, the scraping of their creepy little feet made her grind her teeth. Somewhere, the drip, drip, drip of water mocked her.

“Shut up.” She placed her hands over her ears. “Shut up, shut up, shut up.”

A cockroach scurried by, followed by a disgusting fat rat. The roach crept over her foot; that was when the rat caught it, settling on the soft skin of her foot to eat its disgusting meal. A high pitched screech echoed through the tunnel as she flung the dirty rodent off her. It squeaked as it slammed against the curved wall of the tunnel, dying. Its broken carcass landed atop one of her metal boxes. She glared at the lifeless vermin, her ragged breathing giving way to a wrath-filled screech.

Through the echo of her frustration, the soft, lighthearted chuckles of a man came through.

“Shut up!”

The man’s chuckles gradually morphed into a pleasant crystalline laugh.

“Youngil-ah,” the voice called. “Youngil-ah.”

“Shut up!” the witch screeched. She whirled around, hex ready.

But there was no one. Peals of beautiful laughter ran louder, surrounding her, oppressing her. “You failed, Youngil-ah.”

“Shut up!”

She whir

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Shakuma
#1
Chapter 18: I remember I started reading this a few years ago and I was really excited to read it back then, and even now that I've found it so long after, I'm so glad I got to read it again! I know it hasn't been updated in a while but thank you for writing as much as you did because I thoroughly enjoyed all of it! ♡
imemyself07 #2
Chapter 16: Such a wonderful story!! Looking forward to more of it
fishykevinwoo
#3
Chapter 15: I would assume the brother is far more powerful than Emma.
This witch is a bundle of power with lacking intellect to match. She is undoubtly dangerous.
And there's that mystery surrounding Hyunseong, too intense for me to realise I haven't really seen Minwoo much in this >_<
fishykevinwoo
#4
Chapter 14: What!!!
What are you gonna do to Hyunseong!
Omgg, silvery green does not bode well!!
fishykevinwoo
#5
Chapter 13: You back! Are you back?

Oh well, here comes the action.
It's gonna be bloody, real bloody. I don't suppose they'll let her die an instant death seeing the huge crime she committed.
fishykevinwoo
#6
Chapter 12: "Whatever lover’s quarrel you two wish to have over who wears the pants in the relationship can happen later."
I'm DYING, I'm DYINGGGGGGG.
Oh, I'm not very clear about the fan names. I know Reflection should be Jeongmin's and Champions' Kwangmin so I assume they're separated by OTPs. Eh, so halflings can turn people too? Were they halflings? Ah, I can't remember.
I shall make an educated guess that they are halflings lolz.

Oh my, so that's the reason she's here :O!
I'm guessing it's of Emma's then...? Donghyun's mighty protective of his kind isn't he?

And so the turned will have the characteristics of those who turned them? That's new!
I wonder what Minwoo's es are like :33! But it's cool seeing each member having their own "army" hahahaha, feels powerful.
fishykevinwoo
#7
Chapter 11: DONGHYUN IS SO POWERFUL.
Awww, he turned them all! Were they all on the verge of death or something?
Hahaha Emma is so awkward, I wouldn't have known.
Minwoo is such a sweetie heh. Hyunseong doing aegyo, awwww!

Wonder what caused the sudden change of atmosphere though? What happened :O!
What ~will~ happen?
fishykevinwoo
#8
Chapter 10: I had no idea this was updateddddd!!!
Unless you did a double update, then that would explain it.

I read chapter nine and was like well, I guess their conflict wouldn't end so quickly and then suddenly Donghyun went all nice. Minwoo sure has some silent authority over Donghyun /snickersattheside/
Jeongmin and his flirtatious ways MUAHAHA. Funny how Donghyun punishes them. But when he said treat her like you'd treat me it honestly sounded like "greet your new mother" to me. Maybe I've been watching too much dramas lolz.
fishykevinwoo
#9
Chapter 8: XDDDDD
I wanted to talk about the whole chapter but the ending made me laugh.
So Minwoo can lecture Donghyun too >D! You go, boy, I'll be standing here....laughing.

This vaguely reminded me of Vampire Knights, possibly cause I just marathoned it a week ago about Pureblood vampires and whatnots. Uh, sorry if you haven't seen it XD.
But I'm glad Donghyun saved her! Even though she saved him first.....but heh.
I wonder if that means the five wolves are all halflings...? That's sad ;~~; They can only live 1/3 the life, right? :(

(I expect the other five to appear more now that the mystery between them is solved :3 I'm missing me some Minwoo heh.)
fishykevinwoo
#10
Chapter 7: :O!
Sheesh this is so interesting!!!
I love your description about the Boyfriend members and all their selca habits.
/and my dongwooooooo ;~;/
Oh my, that was quite a sudden turn of events! I can't tell if Donghyun is anything special except that he's older, right? Then why call him "young master" HAHA. Call him an old man! >D