Chapter 2: wah sehun and chanyeol as dj's, kai as chanyeol's brother, lay as a bartender, jongdae as baek's best friend-- pretty things!!!!! but the best is baek in tight jeans and a loose white shirt and eyeliner.... i could imagine him looking like a lost puppy and im glad chanyeol found him so baek wouldnt be loneky anymore. i think it's a really big deal for baek that yeol didn't take advantage of him but helped him and cared about him instead. hopethey end up in a really nice loving relationship from that point on...

Chapter 1: Hello!
I am Vietnamese and I am writing for you in order to ask for permission to translate your story into my language - Vietnamese.
I guarantee that our translations from yours are non-profit translations for enjoyment purposes only and the Vietnamese sub are just limited only on our Groups main domain at: http://welcomefanfic.wordpress.com/. If the translations were updated on the other site, we were sure we would announce you first
I am looking forward to your answer. Please, reply me soon!

Chapter 2: Just finished reading :D
Umm, sometimes it was a bit confusing, for example as they were sitting on the sofa, talking and suddenly Baek was eating at the dining table. Or was it just me who got it wrong? (So tired today ㅜㅜ)
But nevermind. I liked this fiction, really. I liked how different the two boys were, Chanyeol talkative and Baek somewhat cold. And it was really cute in the end as Baek kissed him >w<
Don't know why but I had to laugh so hard 'cause 'Mr. Eyeliner' and Galaxy Entertainment^^ xD Loved that.
Also, I think the last part where you were talking 'bout love in general was great :)