Chapter 4: I see the last 2 sentences were the blow which made the story feel complete. And your writing style *sigh* i did feel weird at first because a story with so minimum dialogues is unusual. But now i enjoy it very much, your writing style makes dialogues even more meaningful and makes the characters have more depth.
I felt as if reading one long synopsis waiting to be expanded and extended with fillers and more more dialogues haha :) going to review 2nd chance
P.S. actually i want to write the comment as a poem, this make me became a mellow and a romanticist lol
Chapter 3: Kailu kailu kailu kailu pleaaaaseee kailu, there arent enough kailu fics out there. Besides kai and luhan were together for so long, and after they split apart surely they feel some longing for the other, I mean all those memories and those times they were together.... maybe now luhan realizes how important kai is to him, because there is a saying, 'Distance strengthens Love'
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