On Repeat
Description
Irene was stuck reliving the same day, and everyday it ended with her boyfriend being killed by a mysterious stranger.
Foreword
Again, today repeats…
Irene widened her eyes as she saw Suho got stabbed.
The ending is always the same…
Blood spilled out from the wound on his chest and he fell to the ground.
Suho-oppa…
"No…"
Reviewed by B2tyful-Elf from Kaisoo Advisory Reviews
Your description was well-written. The whole plot was just great. The flow was good. From the beginning, you already had me at suspense, the ending was totally unexpected. Well done! Most of your weak points have to do with grammatical errors. Make sure you pick a title that would grab your reader’s attention! It’s got the romance, got the mystery, got the suspense, and got the twist. Overall, though it had a few grammatical mistakes, this was definitely a must-read!
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