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파라곤 Paragon/SM ENT ultimate girl group~Story Start
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   3 Girls were in the practicing room, yet again rehearsing for their debut that was very soon happening.
They were focused on the dance but somehow mentally cursing the absence of one member. They couldn't position themselves properly without her.All of a sudden their music was suddenly stopped by someone.

"WHERE IS THAT DAMN MAKNAE!!"A petite girl in her early 30's shouted at the 3 girls present in the room.

One of them knelt down on the floor because of exhaustion, she wasn't the best dancer afterall. The other 2 were standing up, one was checking herself on the huge mirror while the other one was approaching the tiny lady who interrupted their practice time. She turned out to be no other than their manager.

"Yeonmi. she has to practice did you remind her!"their manager nagged at the leader

Yeonmi shook her head "i managed to drag her in but it seems like she sneaked out and wondered off somewhere"
"Just leave her be really...she can catch up still but it's really annoying!"The girl who was currently checking her reflection said while her eyes still fixed on her self.

"I really hope she won't cause your downfall girls...i sincerely do"The manager said while massaging the temples of her head

"she's a troublemaker..but she won't do anything stupid"The girl kneeling on the floor exclaimed while forming a smile on her lips, she believed that their resident blacksheep still has hope.

As if on cue the door of the practice room opened revealing the girl everyone was looking for.

"why are you staring at me like you've seen a ghost?"She said one eyebrow raised.

 
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MelodyXX
#1
Chapter 30: after one exam I came home to see this updated and that made me really happy! the girls are working really hard on their comeback and I bet that will show sm how good they really are. THEY WON!!! really really really happy! and they won against suju and 2pm! I bet heechul's going to sulk about it for a while (but hes still happy for them :) ) The troll being trolled by another troll... and sungmin is going to get them both in trouble sooner or later...I hope its later..
Interesting to see what them being dj will be like and yay royal pirates will be there as well..
thanks for the update!!!
mandopanda
#2
Chapter 29: I thought I had at least commented on Chapter 4 already. jeeze I am terrible at this.
YAY FOR CHANGMIN AND YEONMI. FINALLY. That was really cute and sad at the same time.
STUPID HEECHUL, EMBARRESSING MIJA. LOL That was great. Mirae and Sungmin though. OTP.
Oooohh I wonder how the Mio/Mai, Mindae, Kyuhyun thing is going to play out I mean holy crap son. That's going to be a lot of drama.
YAY FOR THEIR DEBUT. I'm glad mindae came along, it shows how much the girls really care for her.
These girls work way too hard. And the Spice Girls is always a good thing to add lol. #ChildhoodRightThere
Ugh James being a total cutie. #BaeGoals.
Of course all these girls and their LIs. Theyre crazy lol.
YEONMI DON'T DO EVERYTHING YOURSELF. THIS IS A TEAM. WORK LIKE ONE. JFC. >.> Making the girls worry like that. Yoochun is great, getting the distracted Yunho to treat everyone LOL.
I don't get on as much anymore so my comments might be delayed compared to the release of the chapters. That's what happens when you start working full time. >.>
MelodyXX
#3
Chapter 29: wow the girls really work TOO hard I mean they need to learn to take care of themselves as well. But they do say that the hardest working do the best so I bet this comeback will be a big one! The girls really have fun with each other which is really great and really its great that they just get along. Mio and Aegyo gosh the unnies can't resist can they? XD
pabo Yeonmi trying to do everything herself...I bet the girls are going to keep a sharp eye on her from now on.
such a romantic scene though.
good/sad/cute chapter +many feels
thank you for updating so fast as well!
MelodyXX
#4
Chapter 27: poor mindae good thing that they will perform together soon! The girls did really well and for a new group winning first is really hard.
dates don't really matter because the story is good!
Can't wait to see what concept they comeback with
MelodyXX
#5
Chapter 26: first want to say go go Yeonmi!!! getting Kyu to get them food. Poor Kyu is so whipped O.O
Mija sure knows how to take care Heechul hehehe
Sungmin and Mirae are so cute aren't they? Love they way you write them!
Their manager...is funny in her own way and a lot more relaxed than most managers out there.
Suho treat them suho treat them!!!!! that would really be interesting to see. how the girls interact with all of exo
omg omg omg omg leader and changmin wow I'm so happy for them really really really!!!!! That was so cute and their kiss wow XD but of course tvxq had to ruin the moment *sighs*
Seriously Mirae and sungmin are just as I imagined *falls in love 50 million times* so sweet and Mirae really can't ignore aegyo Min
Mija is going to get teased so much
Yunjae so much but really Heechul has no right to say anything cause we know how he is with geng.
ends with Kyu suffering such a blow T-T
If they realy got back together I would cry so hard and laugh soo hard :) Sungmin really is too cute for his own good btw
thanks for the chapter!