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Marrying Mr. Right
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"You two stop flirting and head back inside"

Kim Heechul stood a few feet away, brows raised and both hands on his waist. He was glaring at Siwon who simply smiled back.

"Hyung! What are you doing here?" Sungmin asked. His hadn't  seen his older brother, until now. "Where were you? I was searching for you the whole morning but the maids said you didn't went home last night.

Siwon grinned and poked Sungmin's cheek, which made the cute man grunt and another set of silliness starts between the two.

Heechul silently watches the two, a smile which slightly looks like a frown form in his lips. They have known Siwon since they were all young and he was a nice guy. Heechul knows that Sungmin will be safe under his care.

"Hey stop now and the party's starting, father will surely get mad if you don't come in now" he called which the two ignored, they continue playing around and Heechul couldn't help but smile.

 

 

Chapter One Finale

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ichathoriqlover #1
Chapter 1: Wow this is new for sure, we can choose the plot of the story but my honest opinion, i want sungmin with kyu, no matter what, kyu seems to be torturing minnie now maybe because he didnt know the whole story yet, but my second choice will be siwon because he does loves min.
But since im reading through my smartphone, sometimes the options werent able to be seen all, so yeah maybe if u would clarify each option with the names of heechul, kyu or siwon, that might help a lot, but if you think its not good then let them be as your choice....
Gyaaaa #2
Chapter 1: Hey, this is good, and really brilliant idea...

Just my opinion, but maybe you can make it more interesting by write the choice instead.
Like in very first choices, maybe you can write 'Heechul', 'Siwon', 'Kyuhyun' instead of 'option A', 'option B', and 'option C'

Readers can choose who most interest them first to read before maybe read other couple, instead of blindly choose one of the option. Also there are some people who don't want to read another pairing other than their OTP.

Just my opinion tho'..

Anyway, this is good.. Can't wait for the next chapters... ^^
avis01
#3
Chapter 11: Its a little confusing but loves the way the story goes!! Unique..
I will go for option B... I like kyumin!!
LynSushi
#4
Chapter 1: oh hahahaha thie way of writing this fic is nice :3 its very confusing at first until I saw the comments and work it out on my own :3 kyujerk! ~
Yellin710
#5
Chapter 1: Wow.. what a genius idea you have here..
I never found ff like this way..

At first I chose option B, just because it's my blood type (a lame reason ¬_¬)
So I got KyuJerk there, after read the final I tried the other options andnow can't wait for chapter 2..
I hope Kyumin will be ending happily..
#Kyumin shipper here hehe~
kyumin99 #6
Chapter 1: Hello there, love how yr story goes so far , I choose option B and it was kyu who hurts Min.

can't wait for chap 2 , update soon