The Beginning

A Poet's First Love (시인의 첫사랑)

Beyond imagination was this day,

where my beliefs didn't go my way.

What would I have done,

if those eyes were gone,

nothing

                                                                             and I see

                                                                                                         emptiness.

 

The beginning of everything, 

is the end of something

something BIG

something bad

something magical

sorrowful, joyful, surpirising.

ALL ends

                but

                       not this.

 

The beginning of everything,

the beginning of this thing

of my story

my new life

my new perspective

and the new me - L U H A N.


Yoonjae's comments:

This part of the full story brings out the 'now' point of view of Luhan, where he begins to narrate and introduce how much his 'first love' has impacted him. It shows that he is still Luhan, at the end, where the same line is repeated in the previous chapter, but he has changed, because of the new points of himself. Enjoy the story - the romance begins now!

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blue_ALV
#1
Chapter 8: this post is really interesting. the fact that it is not really in a story/narrative format makes it unique and one of a kind. the poems are short yet apealling. though a chapter or two did seem redundant or repetitive but l take it that it is due to diff. perspectives.

Also, correct me if l am wrong: Luhan is definitely locker no. 326 while Minseok is locker no. 204.

nevertheless, it is a good read. Well done & looking forward to the update.
jinwoo27 #2
Chapter 7: really beautiful !!!
maya143
#3
Chapter 3: Wow!! Those poems are beautiful. I am so glad you guys chose Xiuhan as a main character for this poems. I am subscribed :)