Definition of Romance and Luhan

A Poet's First Love (시인의 첫사랑)

Romance is always                       torn              a p a r t

                  it is never meant to be

                                                                 happily ever after

                                                                                               after a whole round of pain,

                                                                                                                       of heartaches,

                                                                                                         of emotional tantrums,

                                                and of ∞ mis  understandings.

How     I would ask      How would I ever

                                                                         or never

                                                                 f

                                                                   a

                                                                      l

                                                                        l

                                                                          in love?

Romeo and Juliet

                                        it would never be for me.

  me - L U H A N

  Nothing but Luhan.

I was nothing much as compared to ALL of them.

  The days always passed,

  crowds of crossing

  clouds by

  or the nights dawning

  sickle silver shining and slowly striking by

Never O

  N

  C

  E

  Caring about me

  my life

  my mere existence

If so, why am I deserving of this life, of this love, I am receiving right

  now?

 

 

 


Yoonjae's note:

This poem is a short beginning. The way the words are located on the poem has a significance, for it brings out the imagery of the words. Being a basic poet myself, I find this extremely mind-wrecking at the many times I had to re-write this. As this is written from scratch, actually a story plot, things will be hard as it only focuses on the expression and more of narrating than to give it away.

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blue_ALV
#1
Chapter 8: this post is really interesting. the fact that it is not really in a story/narrative format makes it unique and one of a kind. the poems are short yet apealling. though a chapter or two did seem redundant or repetitive but l take it that it is due to diff. perspectives.

Also, correct me if l am wrong: Luhan is definitely locker no. 326 while Minseok is locker no. 204.

nevertheless, it is a good read. Well done & looking forward to the update.
jinwoo27 #2
Chapter 7: really beautiful !!!
maya143
#3
Chapter 3: Wow!! Those poems are beautiful. I am so glad you guys chose Xiuhan as a main character for this poems. I am subscribed :)