Lockers

A Poet's First Love (시인의 첫사랑)

Time was something

I couldn't chase

and so it passed away

like it never came

 

The next day

I see something red

hunched up from

the green of my locker.

It came with a letter

that had nothing on it

but a short paragraph

of handwritten words.

 

Hey locker 326

Thanks for the apple

I'm better than that day

You want coffee?

Sure.

-Locker 204


Yoonjae's comments:

This is sort of losing its vibe in poetry, and leaning towards a narrative side >.<

This is short and simple, about the exchange of letters. Do anticipate their meeting at the cafe! Enjoy!

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blue_ALV
#1
Chapter 8: this post is really interesting. the fact that it is not really in a story/narrative format makes it unique and one of a kind. the poems are short yet apealling. though a chapter or two did seem redundant or repetitive but l take it that it is due to diff. perspectives.

Also, correct me if l am wrong: Luhan is definitely locker no. 326 while Minseok is locker no. 204.

nevertheless, it is a good read. Well done & looking forward to the update.
jinwoo27 #2
Chapter 7: really beautiful !!!
maya143
#3
Chapter 3: Wow!! Those poems are beautiful. I am so glad you guys chose Xiuhan as a main character for this poems. I am subscribed :)