★ chapter nine

caSTAR§ rookie

It was the end of the first week and the trainees have managed to memorize most of the choreography by heart, with minimal disruption due to the ever-changing positions. They still had to work on the dance in the event that they had were assigned handheld mics. It was troublesome, really. And they still weren't in stage attire yet. They were racing against time. However, Sunday was their appointed cool-off day, and the trainees were void of schedules.  

JaeEun's dorm - "Does it not bother you that we have exctly five days left till the big day and some of us still can't remember parts of the choreograhy?" MinJae sighed, rolling over on the couch to face her other dorm mates positioned around the room. "You've got that problem too?" MinAh sat up at the dining table. JaeEun and SooJin exchanged worried frowns. It didn't seem that their performances were up to standards at all. The girls stared at KyunJi as she strode out of the room with a bright red scarf. "Should we use today to practice?"

HyeMi's dorm - "Ah - but today's supposed to be our cool-off period - we're not supposed to work on the pieces..." MiYoo piped up softly, biting her lips in consternaion. "I mean, it's mandatory cool-off for a reason, right?" She shrugged, crossing her right arm across her torso. YonNi wrapped an arm around the younger's shoulders and shook her gently. "Don't worry, we're not going to break the rules." She looked at the rest. "But... we really do need that extra practice... should we do a run-through? Just a run-through." She glanced pointedly at MiYoo. The latter gulped uneasily but nodded. 

The group agreed to meet at one of the two trainee studios reserved for them. They settled down as they discussed their different choreographies in thrilled voices. They had never all been in the same room before since their first day at practice. JaeEun clapped for attention. "I've cleared it with our manager... we're allowed two hours of practice today... just this time!" There were loud cheers from SooJin and a few others. MinAh and MinJae high-fived. The girls got up from their seated positions and began stretching. JaeEun offered to go first, and HyeMi's group sat down contentedly at he front of the studio, clapping for their counterparts. HyeMi handled the radioplayer.  

The music started up and the girls got into formation with their arms akimbo. They fanned out perfectly as HyeMi's group bobbed their heads along with the song. MinAh gave a slightly more enthusiastic kick than the rest at some point, elliciting giggles from the audience. It was JaeEun's turn to sing, and both MinAh and KyMin stood on both sides of her, planting a kiss on their leader as she belted her notes. KyunJi squealed and buried her head into HyeSun's shoulders. The girls grinned. HyeMi looked confused at the proceeding messy jumps of the girls and all of them cracked up at their obvious lack of synchronization. YooMi continued on to her dance break with her eyes trained on the floor. When it was YooMi's turn to sing, JaeEun and MinHee waddled forward and formed a heart above the girl, turning to kiss her as she ended her solo. There was a brief section where the members could freestyle and there were guffaws as EunMi let loose with a ridiculously large movement that overshadowed the rest. There were many obvious mistakes - SuJin always bending her knees only one beat after the rest, MiYoo always sticking her back leg out instead of her front leg forward, SooJin forgetting the turns, MinAh being overly-excited and exaggerating every dance move, KyMin missing the intermediate steps, and many others. YoonKi was voted as having the best artistry at the end of the session, while MinHee was the only one to complete the entire performance without any mistakes. The girls marked through the problematic phases without music and managed to get a half-decent result.   

The girls switched groups and it was JaeEun's turn to man the stereo. They settled down comfortably as they awaited the next group's performance. From the starting, they could see that HyeMi's team was much more organized than theirs, with each of the girls nodding their heads with the beat. Almost every movement was perfectly in sync. JinRa got the little wiggle correct and beamed. There were hushed whispers in the audience as they watched on, enthralled. HyeSun and HaRu exchanged a glance and looked away promptly, stifling their giggles as they continued the choreography. SuJin turned to EunMi. "The song is so sweet I'm starting to wish that I was in their group." The latter chuckled and lightly smacked the elder on the arm. "Yah, ours is good too!" There was a yelp from MinAh as she seemed to catch something important. "They don't know the words to the song - the lyrics RuiXian mouths are different from the rest!" The girls stared, and sure enough, RuiXian blushed as she retorted, "I mixed up the different stanzas!" The girls chortled, and as the performacne drew to a close with no other prominent mistakes, JaeEun's team stood up and gave a standing ovation. HyeMi bowed and the rest followed suit. She straightened up and pinched the bridge of her nose to prevent herself from breaking into laughter. "Actually," she confessed, "half the song was wrong..." The girls collasped in embarrassed heaps as they nodded with tears streaming down their faces. "KyunJi-unnie was at the wrong side of the stage!" HaRu choked, her laughing fit igniting coughs. "And MinJae sang YonNi-unnie's part!" MiYoo joined in, chortling as a look of bewilderment crossed the elder's face. "No wonder!" She slapped her forehead, finally realizing why she had so few lines. JinRa took all this in with agape. "...and I thought we were all doing well!" HyeMi scrunched her eyes up and clutched at her head in bafflement. "You mean you didn't know that so many things were out of place?!" The girl looked at her leader forlornly. "I was doing well..." The grils erupted into laughter yet again, lying exhausted on the floor.   

The girls went through the choreography a couple more times before they decided that they were sure of their positions and roughly aware of parts they had to be more careful of. HyeMi had called for takeaway while the girls cooled down in the air-conditioned room. It was the first time that they had seen the entire dance of the opposing group. It made everything seem less surreal. The girls had broken into groups by now - SooJin and HaRu had joined JaeEun and HyeMi in picking up the lunchboxes, leaving the other fourteen girls to their own devices. KyunJi, MinAh, and MinJae were trying to learn one another's choregraphy while SuJin and EunMi watched on gleefully. YonNi, MiYoo, and HyeSun were trying to recap their own positions and choregraphy, but had gotten distracted by the boisterious trio. They stood by the sides, doubled over in laughter as MinAh copied the steps, less successfully than most. YooMi, YoonKi, and KyMin were lying spread-eagled, looking on with amusement. RuiXian had retired to the corner, tapping furiously on her mobile phone yet again. Having just returned from the washroom, JinRa weaved past the noisy trainees and sat quietly next to MinHee. The former turned towards her absent-mindedly. "MinAh is such a talented dancer..." She blinked as she realized that she had spoken those word out loud, but before MinHee could reply, they were interrupted by a commotion at the door.

"We're back!" SooJin hollered as they trooped in with their lunches. 


author's note:     finals start tomorrow but yayy we're moving forward - slowly I know oops. & I have decided to add VIXX into the equation so let me know if you want your love interest changed /winks imgettingtaekwoonieeeeee

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BiasListOfDOOM
#1
I feel like I might be imagining the update - or was it deleted. I know I'm really late for it...but I don't see it anywhere. I'm so confused. I was looking forward to what you had written...
xxiikimm
#2
Chapter 60: Authorniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim ~~~~~ Hello hello hello hello helloooooooo! I'm just so glad that you're back. ㅠㅠ You could do whatever you want, Authornim. I'll be sure to give you all my support~ Hwaiting~ ^^ ♥
EeteuksAngel
#3
Chapter 60: Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so glad that you're alive!
I hope you are doing alright! ^^
I will be up for whatever you want. ^^ If you wanna do a new fic, I will totally be there. Or if you want to complete this, it's all good. Whatever you would like to do, author-nim. ^^
KyungmiElf
#4
Chapter 57: OMIGHOSH YOU'RE BAD I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND I LOVE YOU HEUHEU I'M SO HAPPY YOU'RE BETTER ENOUGH TO UPDATE but remember that health comes first before anything else and we're here to support ^0^
Cant wait to see what happens next but omg its getting emotional hopefully my character kyunji doesnt leave but i dont want anyone else to leave either its so nice as it is :""( good luck to everyone and no matter what im always here until the end author-nim!! :D
AlienFromMars
#5
Chapter 57: /screaming/ omg you're back!!!! asdfghjkl this was a really nice chapter, i can't wait for the next :# It's ok, take ur time, i'll be waiting patiently hehehe; hwaiting!
Typical-Singaporean
#6
Chapter 57: OMG THAT SUPRISE I GOT WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATED! :D OMG OMG OMG OMG I'M SOOOO SUPER GLAD YOU'RE BACK! I MISS THIS FANFIC SO MUCH LIKE NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBEEE! Thank you soooooo much for coming back to this fanfic ^^

I can't watch the performance video now, since I'm still in school, but I will watch it later when I get home XD
The description of the performance is just too detailed! It's like I can imagine everything they're doing and is watching their performance live! I don't usually like long chaptered fanfics but this one is an exception XD
Don't worry about any of those mistakes, girls! It's totally normal since it's your first time infront of such a huge audience body! And on air too!
I'm sure Super Junior are nice judges and will give the poor girls a second chance... right?
Catching and doing aygeo at the hover camera eh? XD
Seems like they're not that inexperienced either hahahaha!
Goodjob SooJin and YoonKi! :D
And take care of your vocals JaeEun!
All the girls are so talented and adorable, I can't imagine any of their sadness when the results are not in favour of them T^T

Awwww omg the girls are all so sweet to each other! And HyeMi escaping huh XD
KyMin is just so cute HAHAHAHA lightening the mood
N and MinHo as mc! Omg mueheheheheheheheheheheHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahaha

OH GOD THE RESULTS WHYYYYYYYYY CRIES WHYYYYYYYYY OH WHYYYY I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRR
xxiikimm
#7
Chapter 57: I got mixed feelings while reading this. T___T On the first part, I was smiling because the trainees were sooo cute! Well, they've made quite some mistakes but even so, it seems that they enjoyed their performance together. And those mistakes can help them grow and improve as artists~ It's really cute seeing them perform with such energy!
But then came the last part. ;---; I wouldn't want them to say goodbye to someone. T___T Nooooo~ The eliminations. T^T *cries a river* I already bought a lot of tissue boxes. Authorniiim~ my hearteu is ohmygatheu. ;--; </3

Thank you for the update Authornim! It's okay. :) Take your time! I know you're going through a lot these days but just know that we're always here to turn your frown upside down. Keep on smiling! We're right here for you. ^^ *blows you kisses*
EeteuksAngel
#8
Chapter 57: Eeep! I'm so excited for this! ^^ *rubs hands together*

Ah... yes. Muscle memory... I still find my body automatically start breaking out in dance when I hear songs from the musicals I was in in high school. xD
Poor YonNi. The mentally berating is the worst. Even if no one notices the mishap, you do, and it's the worst feeling in the world. Poor thing. :(
Hehe. JinRa's so cute. ^^
Awwwh! ^^ I feel so proud of HyeMi's group. :')
Hehe. it's cute how they're all so excited and giving it their all. ^^
Ouch. That just made me cringe and hurt my throat just thinking about JaeEun's mess up. >.<
Ohhh.. Uh, oh. A little too enthusiastic... now they're just getting sloppy and making mistakes all over the place. >.<
*sigh of relief* Thank goodness that SooJin and YoonKi were able to hold their own without any mistakes.!
Awwwh. TT.TT This is making me sad... Poor things...
Hehe. I can see you couldn't resist putting N in there. (;
Hehe. When I read that Minho was there, I smiled. Now that I see Super Junior, I'm now leaning closer to my laptop screen with a goofy grin on my face. Ugh. I think I'm helpless.
SuJu would converse noisily... just saying. I don't think those guys could ever truly be quiet. xD

Eeeep! I'm so excited for the results! :D


This was so good, Author-nim! I loved this one completely (as usual). It's just so good. And heartfelt. And real. Like it just feels real. Like the emotions. The actions. It's just great.

And you don't ever have to be sorry. We understand. Don't push yourself too hard and take your time. We all love and support you so much! ^^
lemony1004 #9
Chapter 57: hiii :) thanks for the update!!! :) ooo i was like yesss muscle memory!!! but T.T the mistakes... i'm sure as the audition and training continues, they'll become more professional and perfect choreography like SNSD!
elf_verl
#10
Chapter 57: I hope everything is well now? Thank you for taking the time to update:))

As usual, you delivered! Hahaha omg I love how you brought out the performance! But at the same time.. I feel sad cause this is probably the last time they are performing as a 18><