surprise

why?? how??

kim slowly opened and closed her eyes a couple of times trying to figure out why she was at the hospital. she kept thinking for a few minutes when it hit her she remembers what happend tears were starting to come out so she got up and went to the bathroom the time was 7:20 am.

same time but outside the hospital pie was about to enter the hospital when she felt a strange feeling inside of her but she didnt know what it was so kept going she went inside to check in and went to kims room she stoped at the door took and took a deep breath ad went in she was shock to see that kim was not in her bed she couldnt move until she heard the bathroom door open

kim: aaahhh you scard me ms.

 pie didnt know what to say

kim: ms. are you okay you looked like you saw a ghost.

pie:yyyy.....o.o.o..o.u.uuu.

kim: yeah me what???

pie: kim you are up walking and talking when did you wake up

kim: i woke up like and hour or so ago and may i ask you a question???

pie: oh and yeah you may ask me a question

kim: who are you??

pie: oh sorry my name is pie manaying

kim: oh........wait manaying from the manaying group

pie:yes why

kim: oh it has become a dream of mine to make negotiation with your group ms.manaying

pie: please call me pie and can you excuse me a minute

kim: yeah sure take your time

pie went outside becuase one she was excited becuase of kim and two she needed to call p'boy.pie started to call p'boy but she didnt know what so say.

p'boy: hello pie what you need

pie:sorry to call you at this hour but i have to tell you somthing about kim

p'boy: what is it wait dont tell me did kims parents find out that shes in a coma and that i lied to them about kim being in america becuase she needed time from the break up or worse did yam find out

pie: no none of that silly kim.....woke...up p'boy

p'boy: no your lying hard is it revenge for what i did last time i told you that i was sorry

then pie remembered what p'boy did it was pies birthday and she already told him that she may have feelings for kim and she didnt know why. so p'boy was planing a joke on her that he would surprise pie with a room filled with kims photos and even a cardboard cut-out of kim pie got mad at him for doing that and didnt talk to him for a month even though poor p'boy send her gift and said sorry a hundred of times.

pie: no p'boy its not a revenge i even talked to her come quick no come now

p'boy: ok what ever you say but if your joking im never ever going to talk to you

pie: ok whatever p'boy

p'boy came to the hospital and saw that pie was standing out side in a deep thought so he decide to scare her

pie:aaaahhhh p'boy  you almost gave me hard attack

p'boy: yeah right lier lets see if you are right and if your not not more seeing me and if you are im buying luch for us okay deal??

pie: okay deal

pie opened the door first and went inside and saw that kim was sitting at the edge of the bed and kim notice that someone opened the door so she smiled at pie.pie's heart was starting to melt becuase of kims smile then p'boy took a deep breath and went in and he couldnt believe it he saw his best buddy sitting and moving and he was shocked after so many years of seeing kim sleep and now sitting so he couldnt move or even speak so kim got up laughing and hugged him so tight and said

kim: hello buddy nice seeing you here

p'boy:kim your awake

pie: told you now you have to buy me luch haha

kim: sorry to inturupt but you know pie

p'boy: we met here

kim: oh by the way what is the date

pie: its august 17

kim:oh so its august of 2006

pie and p'boy just stare at each other

pie:no my friend its august of 2014

hearing the year 2014 rushed into kims head she couldnt believe it that she has been in a coma of so many years she was shocked then she started to think about her parents and yam if her parents were still alive and tears rolled down again so p'boy was about to hug her when he saw that someone else did it was pie and by surprised kim hugged her back and they hold each other tight for a cuple of minutes and 'boy was just standing there watching this scene then two days passed and kim was discharged but during those two days kim and pie became closer than before pie knew more stuff from kim and kim knew more stuff from pie.something change inside of kim her heart was beating faster she was getting nervous being with pie and other stuff and she knew what that feeling was sense she had it with yam but this time it was differant she felt like a new person.

 

today kim was dischaged from the hospital nobody knew that kim was at the hospital.pie went with kim to help her becuase p'boy was going to be busy during this month which was a lie becuase he wanted to see kim and pie spend time together.so days passed and she was ready to talk to her parents of what happend and why she wasnt with them but she needed some help so she took pie with her because sometimes kim parents never trust her so she needed prove.

at Jittaleela Residence

pie:kim are you sure that you are ready

kim: yes

pie: are you nervous

kim:yes

pie:stop saying yes all the ride here you kept saying yes it getting annoying

kim: oh really im sorry pie are you ready and nervous

pie: yes im ready and kinda nervous

kim: okay lets go

they steped out of the car and were ready to knock at the door until someone opened the door it was jane kims childhood bestfriend and kim was shocked and wondering why was she doing here and kim knew that jane had feelings for her then she quickly grabed pies hand and interwind fingers and pie was surprised with what kim did and just let it be she knew that kim had a reason to do so but inside of her. her heart was beating so fast that i think kim can hear it.jane was shock after seeing kim its been so many years that she only saw kim and didnt notice pie at all she was ready to hug kim but then pie spoke

pie:ah hello ms. are you okay

then jane turned her head and notice pie was standing there

kim:hello jane how are you

jane:yeah im fine can i pease ask you who are you??

pie was about to speak but then kim spoke

kim: ah jane this is pie my girlfriend and kissed pie on the cheek

pie and jane were surprised of what just happen and what kim said

kim:jane may you plaese move we are going in thanks

jane:yea come in

so then the three of them went inside to look for mr. and mrs. Jittaleea they all went to the living room and mr. Jittaleela saw jane.

MR. Jittaleela: jane i thought you said you were going home

then MR. Jittaleela saw kim and another girl. then he stood up and hugged kim so tight for minutes then Mrs. Jittaleela came down to check on her husband when she saw her child huging her husband so she went running towards them and huged kim for a few minutes and went to the living room and all of them took a seat and started talking

kim: hello mom and dad how have you've been

fine said Mr. and Mrs Jittaleela together

Mr. Jittaleela:kim can you introduce this beautiful lady

kim:yea this pie my girlfriend dad

jane was still there so they had to pretend

Mrs. Jittaleela: she is beautiful

pie: thank you Mr. and Mrs. Jittaleela

Mrs. Jittaleela: just call us mom and dad

pie: thank you mom and dad

Mr.Jittaleela: so kim what brings you here how was america

kim: that is what im came to talk about i was not in america

Mr.Jittaleela: WHAT????

kim:actually i was in the hospital because of a car acciendent then went into a coma for years but please dont be mad a p'boy

Mrs. Jittaleela: ok we wont be mad at p'boy he may had some reasons so please explain

kim: it was the year 2006 i came from a buisness meeting early to surprise yam to marry me but i caught her cheating then it started raining and i could barely see anything and beacuase of a truck we crashed and i was transferd to the hospital they did surgery and after that i went into a coma then a month ago i woke up.

Mr.Jittaleela:ok if all that happened then when did you meet pie kim

kim:i met pie at the hospital she was the one taking care of me all these years dad

Mrs.Jittaleela : thank you pie for takimg care of kim

pie:your welcome mom

then they talked for an hour and went to kims room

pie: im sorry ms when did you ask me to be your girlfriend

kim:im sorry pie for using you like this the truth is that during this month i have developed some feelings for you i've felt something i have never felt before but if you feel the same can you be my girlfriend???

pie: the truth is that when i first saw you i felt differant than before but when i met p'boy and heard what you were like i knew that i loved you even when i didnt know nothing about you kim

kim:so its a yes

pie said yes shyly

then kim huged pie tight saying to her ear I WILL NEVER LET YOU GO

Pie: promise??

kim: promise

 

sorry if it was kinda confusing

 

 

 

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