Chapter 6: Authornim...pls.update....

Chapter 6: Hai Dear Author, I really hope that you'll be able to continue this story ...

Update soon

Any update ?!!!:(:(

Chapter 6: Update soooooon
Please

Chapter 6: Thank you authornim........ i will wait for u'r update.... :)

Chapter 5: Author-nim, hope you will be able to settle your family issue soon..
Sighz, I would actually prefer Jinhyuk and Jihyo instead..

Chapter 2: Hehe so Jongkook has eyes for her already - I admit it is a little faster than I thought, considering as Jihyo said there are more beautiful ladies working in the office with him - Jongkook seems a little too easily impressed? I feel like Jjihyo would be the type of person that a father-in-law would like though hehe
... Although isn't it a little rude to say "Hi" to someone older than you that you've just met, especially a father in lawish person - in that kind of occasion a "hello" or "nice to meet you" would be more respectful
Just a couple personal tips since I really do like the story so far: it would look a lot better if you don't put the (Author's POV) when you're changing POV? I'm sure all readers can tell there had been an POV change, so it might be better to do the ---- or something. And thought has a different punctuation than dialogue as to not get the two confused. Usually thought it italicized or single quoted 'thoughts' but italicized is quicker to recognize as a though.

Chapter 1: It seems pretty good although Jongkook does seem a little out of character there but the setting is good! I think you just need to watch for the grammar errors and you'd be fine!
[I started to feel nervous] should be on a separate line, and ["why does he.."] the 'w' needs to be capitalized.
Ah and something you should note, won doesn't work like dollars there is no "cents" for won and the lowest won digit 10 won but this is hardly ever used so it would make more sense and for simplicity's sake to say 109,523,000 won. (1000 won is about $1) ^^

Chapter 4: Nice! Keep updating!