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THE APPLICANTS...
I am not going to be very strict with the application, I will try to be as nice as possible and advice you on the things you should change. If by any chance something is not explained correctly in the application you may either choose to rewrite that paragraph or explain it to me in the comments section without editing the application. "Reviewing" means that I'm currently busy and I don't have time to review your application now, "Pending" means you need to change/explain some things, "Accepted" means there are no errors with your application and "Rejected" means you either didn't turn it in the right place or you have lots of errors. Another thing I would like to say is that English is my third language so I'm semi-fluent and I may have some grammar mistakes, but please do notice me when you spot them and correct me. Thank you for reading all of this!
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| TOTAL APPLICANTS ♡ 011 | LAST UPDATED ♡ 08/03/14 |
 kim ae mi。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡
Thank you for being my first applicant, nice to meet you Brooke (such a nice name). In the title you wrote "Ai Me" and in the name section and the rest of the application "Ae Mi", so I'm guessing it's the second one, not the first one, so change the name from the title. The basics are good, poor girl she's so skinny, but that's good because all the idols are almost anorexic or such. I can see that Ae Mi is a very bright and cheerful character, so I think traveling with her would be really fun and nice to write about. The background was on point and the trivia was really cute. I imagine her leaving sticky notes around the dorm with some drawing that resemble Kris'. The love interest is completely fine with me, so don't worry about it, if somehow you think about changing it just announce me. Omg, you have Lim Kim as your friend, gosh I love that girl, she's perfect! Julong's quote is so pretty, it's the first time I heard it actually and it sounds very nice. Overall the application was good and I really liked it, somehow it made me feel all fluffy inside. Thank you again for applying! ♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/19/14 ♡
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 ahn jihyun。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡
Hello and thank you for applying. The first thing I noticed, you forgot to write your name, username and activity rate that's under character's name. For the hometown if it's the same just write "Seoul" again. Other than that, that was your birthday for real? Oh my god, weird. Your personality, background and all the others are good, I enjoyed reading them and they sound very nice. Oh my god, the first meeting between her and Kris, I had to stop reading cause I imagined him all angry while tripping because of all the cables. I love the meeting, it's super nice. And don't worry, your love line it's not complicated and it sounds very endearing, I would love to write about it. Other than that, I will put your application on pending and you will be accepted once you write the little basics I mentioned earlier aka the name, username and activity rate. Other than that it was all good and I enjoyed reading your application, thank you again for applying! ♡ accepted ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/19/14 ♡
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 yoo hae in。
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Ahh, you used Su Eun, she's one of my favorite ulzzangs. Hae In reminded me so much of myself, you have no idea. The basics are all good, personality and background too. Hae In is an interesting character and I could definetely work with that. I really liked the answers from the little interview part, they were entertaining and fun to read. Her and Soohyun seem like a nice pair, the drinking buddies are definetly something I want to write about. Your application was very nice to read and had some really good points, I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for applying and for creating a nice application! ♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/20/14 ♡
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 YOON EUN SON。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello Ella, thank you for applying! I really don't have much to say cause everything was basically perfect with the application. I really like it, the stage name is very pretty and unique. Aw, her relationship with Jin is so adorable, I kind of ship EunSeok too. I really don't know what else to say, thank again for applying!
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/23/14 ♡
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 kang yoonjo。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thank you for applying. I don't have much to say cause everything was fine. You don't have any errors and I really like your character, she seems fun and exciting. And omg, you have Minkyung as your vocal twin, she's my goddess, her voice is so pretty! The answers were funny and I really liked them too. I don't have anything else to say cause everything was basically on spot. Thank you again for applying!
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/26/14 ♡
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 soyun 'valerie' love。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thank you for applying. First things first, I will address Valerie as "Oh Soyun" throughout the whole story, or at least when she's in South Korea, as I honestly think her American name would be a little hard to pronounce for the others. I know you said she introduces herself with the surname "Oh" but I just wanted to make sure you agree on that. So she grew up in America, but learnt Korean and all that jazz about culture and such, but how did she became a trainee in South Korea? If you mentioned it in the application and I didn't read it, sorry. If you haven't just add a couple of sentences on how she came back in Korea and how her parents reacted, things like that. Other than that, everything seems pretty neat and well-written, I like that behind the whole idol status, she's just like any other girl in her 20s. The relationship and personality parts are all good and I really like her interactions with JongSuk, very cute. So just tell me how she decided to come back in South Korea and it's all done, I'll put you on pending til then, but I'll change the status to "accepted" as soon as you do that. Thank you again for applying and for a nice application!
♡ accepted ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/28/14 ♡
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 kim jiyun。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thanks for applying! Jiyun seems like such a nice girl inside and out, I really like her. She seems pretty fun and she kinda reminds me of myself. I feel like her face-claim matches her personality really well and it was a very inspired choice to use Eunji as your face-claim. Everything was good, so I don't have much to say. Thanks a lot for an amazing character and for applying!
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/30/14 ♡
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 hwang hyomin。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thank you for applying! Everything was good with your application and I liked it. I can definetely picture her as the main dancer, your ulzzang choice just gives me the dancer feel. Her instagram address is really cute, it's very funny. Oh my god, you have all my biases listed for love interest(s), her relationship with Taehyung is fun and I can already imagine how it would be traveling with these two. The scene suggestion reminded me Winner's Jinwoo who got lost in the hotel's lobby, I can picture something like this happening to her, too. Overall I really liked your application and I enjoyed reading it a lot, thank you again for applying.
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 07/30/14 ♡
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 han yuna。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello, thank you for applying! Wow, everything was so detailed, the reason I put you on pending is that you gave me the same reason for two of her nicknames: yun and juliet and I think the one for Juliet is supposed to be something else, right? So just modify that and it's all good. I really, really liked your characters, the trivia part was so funny, i like her first song, very cute. The poor girl, but I can totally see JYP not letting his idols talk with her. Aw, her ideal type is Kookie, he really is perfect but still ugh. Her interactions with Jinyoung are so cute, I melted, I ship them so hard. To be honest, I only planned to read a bit of your application cause I'm very busy now, but I ended up reading it all. It was very entertaining and very detailed, I really appreciate you took your time and wrote so much. Once again, modify the explanation for her nickname and I'll change the status to accepted.
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 08/03/14 ♡
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 song ju yeon。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thanks for applying! The first thing I noticed was that your characters has almost the same name as I was planning to give to my characters, except I write it like "JooYeon", anyway, that's not a problem, just a cute thing I noticed. Overall your application was very cute and nice, I don't have much to say cause everything was good and I liked reading it. The relationship part is really cute, ugh Dispatch messing with everybody, but it was a cute scandal though. I'm not gonna mention Mark is one of my ultimate biases, the two of them are really cute. I really enjoyed reading your application and thank you again for applying!
♡ ACCEPTED ♡ LAST REVIEWED 08/06/14 ♡
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 nam seolreun。
REVIEWED BY (HIMME-) ♡ Hello and thank you a lot for applying. Your character seems so quirky, in spite of the whole cold/mysterious and bossy aura she gives off. She reminds of myself actually, the whole personality and style description are just like me. Oh my god, how can she hate Nutella?! That's like humans' most amazing creation ever. I really like your character and everything was good with it. You're on pending cause you forgot to delete the little cheatsheet in the beginning of the application, also if you don't have any misc characters (below the friends section) you may delete that part as well. Other than that, everything was good and neat and I liked it, so just delete that and you're accepted.
♡ accepted ♡ LAST REVIEWED 08/06/14 ♡
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