Chapter 1: beautifully written, it is simply perfect!

i confess that i clicked on this story because a) i was bored and b) i just really really REALLY like stars.
YOU ARE LOVELY. you like stars too and you write like your blood is ink and your skin is parchment. I think I'll just go spam your other stories now. Okay? Okay? <3

Chapter 1: Cries tears of blood over this perfection piece ;aa;

Chapter 1: I might need some clarification to what happened to Luhan in this story....but nevertheless, you leave me breathless!! And totally im awe. I mean like its just so perfect and everything runs smoothly and i can almost feel myself in the story itself. Its great, really. This story is fantastic. You're a great writer, i wish i can hear more from you again any time soon, xx

Chapter 1: Wow, I'm speechless right now.
This is so realistic and I love how you portrayed the characters.
Lu Han and Sehun v.v I love them but in the story, I hate them... Poor Suho :c

Chapter 1: Luhan isnt dead?

Chapter 1: 0__0 woah---The song fits perfectly with this story!! I love it when authors add a playlist with their writing, because it really helps to bring all the words to life, especially here, where Joonmyun & Sehun's characterization is really quite phenomenal
uuggh i love 1940's!au (stuff based in the past) so much!! plus the seho ft cheating lulu(the other woman)was really quite refreshing from what I usually read
good luck for the competition!! good job - even tho it was tragic at the end

wow...no word for you..its beautiful and sad in the same times.my heart hurt..

Chapter 1: This was wow. I hated Luhan and Sehun for cheating, I felt so utterly sad for Joonmyun. This definitely made me think of the film, Black Swan, because Joonmyun also loses himself to delusions in pursuit of perfection.