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PERSONA
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username - position - ethnicity - love interest - love rival - rival - vocal twin - dance twin - rap twin - variety twin - face claim - status
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REVIEWS.
BRUNA
THE DAZZLING ROSE
dazzlingrose - main vocalist, 2nd lead dancer, face - brazilian / japanese - neymar jr - luhan - seohyun - kim bo hyung - luna - n/a - song ji hyo - bruna marquezine - chosen
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yuko'S REVIEW - hello! ♡ Yuko here. Meet Bruna, my lovely character. feel free to read her application to get to know her a little more. o u o ♡
re'S REVIEW - lovely app! ☾ Bruna's so pretty! Read her app guys, i encourage you all to. Keke i had to, it was tempting
R.E
THE ICE FLOWER
iceflowerre - main rapper, 1st lead dancer - chinese / australian / fijian - xero - zico - hyeri - n/a - jia - le / cl - hyoyeon - angelababy - chosen
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YUKO'S REVIEW - this is re's character! ♡ isn't she pretty? yes, she is. o u o v *showers her with love*
RE'S REVIEW - hello my lovelies ☾meet my character, Fei li! My application is up finally, go look at it^^. *accepts the love yuko gives her* ☾
XIEN
MYSTERIOUS BALL
OF ENERGY
koli-song - triple threat, visual - pure chinese - changmin - mark - naeun - seolhyun - hyejeong - yezi - shin bongsun - pan xiao xiao - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, ko-so! ♡ thank you for being our first applicant. *^* i really, really like Yuxien. she's really unique, a character you don't see everyday. and omfg she's so pretty! perfect to be the visual of eris! and the way you met mark is interesting to write. unfortunately, there's a mistake in your application, your talent twins doesn't suit your position. triple threat is like sub-vocal, sub-dancer, sub-rapper, but your talent twins are all mains. just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
RE'S REVIEW - hello lovely ko-so, ☾you're our first applicant, thank you ^^. I loved yuxien, she's a unique character. Your character is chinese, me to. The china dou! (There may be more, just wait and see) Her idea of being turned down for group concepts is interesting, i have pin you down to get them out *evil smile* i love new concepts. I agree with yuko on your talent twins, trust me i made that mistake once. Ohh running man/weekly idol, i wanted to write about that, tho i'm not very funny. Agree with yuko again, just fix your mistakes and your good! ☾
A
THE HYPERACTIVE
PRINCESS
sugoinagashisakura - triple threat, visual - french / african / american - zelo - bambam - minzy - hyorin - minzy - jia - cl - zendaya coleman - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, Cheonny! ♡ omfg you chose Zendaya as your face claim. ;; believe it or not, she really suits your character, and i love that. angel is an angel indeed (if that actually makes sense). i feel so bad about her mom o n o ;; other than that, i really like her personality, it's short, but very-well writen. she doesn't know how to use a computer. theat's really interesting to write. so now let's move on to your mistakes. you wrote minzy as your rival, but the girl in the picture is dara. so who's your rival here? minzy or dara? and also, your talent twins doesn't suit your position. triple threat are the sub-vocal, sub-dancer and the sub-rapper, but your talent twins are all mains. just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
RE'S REVIEW - hello my lovely cheonny ☾ you chose zendaya as your face claim! I love you so much, tbh i was hoping someone would use her. The story about her mom, that made me sad. I'm a er for sad stories or past, your character fits perfectly. Very nice and detailed app, it was easy to read. I enjoyed reading it. Other than that, i loved you character. Personally i love the name angel, so i was glad you used it ^^. I'm a bit critical, but it was hard to find anything to pick at.
MICCA
THE BEASTLY BEAUTY
heedick - 1st lead vocalist, 3rd lead dancer - pure american - jackson - baekhyun - krystal - hyosung - cl - ailee - chrissy costanza - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, scotty! ♡ michelle is indeed very unique. never before i encounter with such a character. you personality and background are very detailed and well-wrtten. i really like that you started writing the background with michelle's parents, like seriously. there's nothing much i can say, your application is plain perfect. good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely scotty! ☾She's a unique character, there's something about her that just grabs your attention. Easy to read, nice and detailed. It was just plain perfect, her personality and background were very detailed, you even included her parents *thumbs up*.your face claim is very pretty, beauty and the beast? I like it. One thing i don't get was the song suggestion, Be Ambitious? Is that dal shabet or someone else? You're fine, i'm just asking. Good luck! ♡
MELISSA
THE GENTLEWOMAN
cinemon - 1st lead vocalist, 3rd lead dancer - pure english - thomas muellar - chen - lena meyer - ailee - nicole - n/a - amber - emily didonato - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, cin! ♡ your application is short, but very well detailed. i love melissa already. oh wow. so now we got two applicants that is vegetarian! And you chose muellar as your love interest! muellar, a footballer! finally, i'm not alone o u o ;; and when i started this, i thought no one would use footballer, except for me, but you proved me wrong. your scene requests are cute. owo oh and at the "fanclub name and colour" part, code is like the code of the colour (that doesn't make sense ._.) for example, #000000 or #ffffff, etc. that wasn't your mistake btw. your mistake is your password. you wrote audition but didn't hyperlink it to your audition clip. so just hyperlink it and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely cin!☾your application was nice and short, but detailed. I see she's a vegetarian and dyslexic, never came across a charcter like yours before. Easy and quick to read. Eris Tv and showcase? Cool. I do agree with yuko, just fix your mistakes and you're good!
QIS
THE SERENE GIRL
secret- - 2nd main dancer, 2nd lead vocalist - pure malaysian - jibin - doyoon - n/a - krystal - zinni - n/a - iu - didi astillah - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, hwayoung! ♡ i literally squeled when i first saw your application! a malaysian character! asdfghjkl owo (i'm also malaysian, so yeah) nice choice of face claim you have there o u o so many details *^* qistina is indeed a character we need in eris! omfg nicholas sparks, i can see why. o u o your applicatioon is perfect! nothing wrong with it. but i have a question. is qistina muslim or christian? i prefer being christian, though, because i find it hard to write muslim characters for some reason. it's not that i have anything against muslims, i have a lot of muslim friends. so yeah, don't get the wrong idea! >.< anyways, good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely hwayoung! ☾A malaysian character, our first one^^ i had a smile on my face when i seen your app. Our lovely yuko is malaysian also, your face claim is so pretty. Her personality fits her face perfectly, lots of detail. Park jibin is one of my favourite actors ever, and doyoon is one of my favourite seventeen members! Glad you used them. Qistina is such a pretty name, so is her stage name! Qistina in a fight with another eris member? Ouh i like it. Anyways, good luck! Hugs and qis-es ^^
NASHA
HAPPY VIRUS
asdfghjkexo - 1st lead vocalist, 3rd lead dancer - half japanese / half chinese (singaporean) - d.o - sehun - yoona - alice - hyomin - n/a - shin bora - tasha - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, yumi! ♡ omfg your nickname is almost the same as mine. lawls. but i'm not here to talk about that, so let's move to your application. i really like natasha's style, it's really unique. not just her style is unique, but also the girl herself. i really like her personality and also your application, it's really detailed. overall, your application is really great, i'm serious. but unfortunately, there's also some mistakes in your application. natasha is half japanese and full chinese? but if her mom is japanese and her dad is chinese, doesn't it make her half chinese and half japanese? as you can see in the rules/cheatsheet, it said "no idol sibling", but you put kris as natasha' brother (well, if that's even kris. because you wrote kevin wu yi fan and that's like kris's name. but if it's not kris then tell me otl. i'm really stupeed). but even if we allow idol sibling, i'm a little confuse with kris being natasha's brother. kris is born in canada, but you said he's born in beijing. and kris is pure chinese, but natasha is half chinese and half japanese, and they're full-blood siblings. it doesn't really make sense. also, you said in the background that alexandre is still studying in the u.s, but who is there to take care of him? sorry, i'm a little confused with your background part >.< and lastly, your talent twins doesn't fit your chosen positionl. the position you chose are bpth leads, but your talent twins are mains. also, your position doesn't have "rapper", but you have a rapping twin, you shouldn't be having one actually. omg, i feel so mean. i'm not angry actually, why should i, actually? o u o i'm just pointing out your mistakes so you'll have a 100% perfect application. don't get the wrong idea! just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely yumi! I loved your app tbh, natasha likes rilakkuma? Me to! We can be the rilakkuma duo, she's really unique. Her personality was detailed and persisted, i agree with evrything yuko said. When i was reviewing your app, i saw the same errors. I didn't get how she could be half japanese and full chinese, it just doesn't make sense. Your app is 85% good and 15% errors, I feel mean to but, just fix your mistakes and you're good! Good luck!
ODILE
THE SWAN QUEEN
shabang - 1st main dancer, sub vocal - half russian / half canadian - xiumin - kris - naeun - jungbin - min / eunjung - n/a - lee hyori - nina dobrev - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, lizzy! ♡ first of all, i want to apologise for the delay on the review. i like how you put links at the style part, it really helps us more o u o and i seriously like love the way you write your personality! it's so creative! i know that a lot of authors told you this, but your application is perfect. lilya's personality, beackground, everything is very well-written and very detailed. yes! you used nina dobrev, omg i love her o u o ;; and don't worry, nina dobrev as your face claim is just perfect. it fits perfectly with lilya's personality. her height is no problem and having kris as her love rival is perfectly fine. ot12 forever, right? o w o okay so now let's move to your mistakes, the position you chose isn't the main vocalist, but you chose lime, a main vocalist, as your singing twin. and also the position you chose isn't a rapper but you put di as your rapping twin, you actually should leave the rapping twin part blank. just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
RE'S REVIEW - hello lovely lizzy! ☾First of all, can i just take a moment because you used nina as your face claim. One of my favourite characters of the vampire diaries!!, ok moment done. Your application was well written and detailed, nina fits perfectly with lilya's personality. You can just leave the rapping position blank, since your one of your positions isn't a rapper. Her height is fine, just 173 cm isn't 5'7, it's 5ft 8.5. Sorry about that, i'm a perfectionist when it comes to that. Other than that just fix the two mistakes and you're good! Good luck!
JANE
THE MOON'S SMILE
capunnie - 1st lead vocalist, 3rd lead dancer - thai - myungsoo - taemin - jiae - uji - yuri - n/a - tiffany - nett - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, aya! ♡ first of all, i want to apologise for the delay on the review. and omg yes, a thai character o u o ;; these days, i've been searching a lot of thai gril groups and kept listening to them. they're just so cute. o w o i like how you put links on the style part and i also like how you underline her personality traits, it helps us more on writing. jane is really awesome tbvh and i find it really cute that she's a crybaby (because i, myself, am also one o w o). and omg i just love your face claim! she's so cute! oh and re and i'll try our best to fulfill your scene requests! especially that horror movie. and omfg i laughed so hard at that bathroom part. i also love the idea about the video to her fans and friends. your mistake is just minor, don't worry. your position is lead dancer, but you chose bora as your dancing twin, bora is a main dancer. you should choose someone who fits her position. just fix that and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
RE'S REVIEW - Hello lovely aya! ☾sorry for my late review, i got my ipad taken away from me... Because.im.bad *smug smile*. Anywho, i loved your character. You even underlined her traits, you used myungsoo and taemin as your love interest. I love you so much. You used nett as your face claim, she's my favourite member of candy mafia. Your scene request are interesting, aha the bathroom scene made me lol. Dream team! Thank you for requesting that, thank you thank you just thank you. You fixed your mistakes, you're all good ^^. Good luck!
VIR
TEMERARIOUS
KNIGHT
iciere - 1st main dancer, sub-vocal - half chinese / half canadian - yuta - kai - luna - jei - min - n/a - sohee - toda erika - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, vi! ♡ first of all, i want to apologise for the delay on the review. i don't have anything much to say, actually. your application is just perfect, really. there's so many details *^* i can't believe you're done, too *laughs* your scene requests are really cute o u o but i found some minor mistakes in your application. as you can see in the rules, i said no ulzzangs as face claim because ulzzangs are korean. so you have to change your face claim. and also you should just leave your rapping twin part blank because the position you chose is not the rapper. that's all! o w o so just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! so 've looked at your fixed application, but your face claim is still a mistake. because eris is an international group, the members aren't korean, so your face claim can't be korean. i hope you get it this time, sorry if we didn't make it clear enough >.< good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely vi! ☾I seen that you edited your application, that's good. But both of your face claims are korean, i love shinhye and ailee but can you change them... Again. This is an international group, so no members are korean. But they can be asian or a different culture. The than that, i love your application, i mean you even put years in her background. That makes it easier for us to write about her past^^. You put her traits and wrote about them, thats a bonus. That's all, just fix your face claims and you're good. Good luck!
HANA
THE BLOOMING
FLOWER
szeneryheights - 2nd main dancer, 2nd lead vocalist - pure japanese - h:eta - tao - one ket - hyuna / dasom - soyi / nari - n/a - ashley - sakurai rina - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, ky! ♡ first of all, i want to apologise for the delay on the review. i like how you put links at the style parts since it helps us more o w o hatsune is so cute, she looks like the maknae but she's one of the oldest. haha. maybe if she's chosen and eris will be just like t-ara who has a baby-face oldest member. hatsune is indeed positive and hopeful, i really like that about her. oooh and black belter in aikido and karate. o w o hatsune is loved by me *gives her and you cookies* re and i will try our best to fulfill your scene requests! C: !there's just a minor mistake in your application so don't worry. you chose zinni as your dancing twin but zinni is the main rapper, not the main dancer. just fix your mistake and you're good to go! good luck ♡
RE'S REVIEW - hello lovely ky! ☾ouhuhu your hatsune's so cute! Like yuko, she could be the boram of eris^^. Her personality is so cheerful and positive, i like her. H:eta, ouh an alphabat member, first one^^. Oneket is my favourite member of g.i. Just fix your mistakes and you're good! Good luck!
CARMEN
ENCHANTING GYPSY
asianpandii - 2nd main dancer, 2nd lead vocalist - pure chinese - taecyeon - henry - baek ahyeong - soyou / sojin - boa / kahi - n/a - victoria / hyorin - crystal liu yi fei - accepted
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YUKO'S REVIEW - hello, Lynn. ♡ another chinese applicant o u o Guanxin is beautiful! i really love guanxin. and hyper that catherine valentine from victorious / sam and cat? omfg. we totally need guanxin in eris! when i read the background, i agree that guanxin is indeed very pursuasive. she reads ? interesting cx i tell you this, her habits are f-l-a-w-l-e-s-s. i laughed about that drunk part otl. i can already imagine everything *shot* i love love love guanxin! but i have found some (minor) mistakes in your application. i know most of kpop female artist are underweight, but you made guanxin underweight too much o n o just fix that. and also, luhan is taken as my character's love rival so you can't have him as a back-up love interest, so you should fix that as well. that's all. good luck! ♡
RE'S REVIEW - hello lovely lynn! ☾i was reviewing you application earlier and i feel asleep. I am tired from staying up late all the time. Anyways back to the point, hello fellow chinese companion! I loved your application. It was nice and detailed, i didn't really see much mistakes. I seen guanxin's weight being underweight and i thought it was underweight if she was 167cm. I did see that she put her ideal type 2 times in her trivia, just take one out and you're all good. Her relationship with taecyeon is cute, reading all the love interest makes me want a boyfriend /sniff sniff forever alone/. Your weekly idol suggestion made me laugh, she has to go through a punishment to confess. Hehe. Yeah just fix your ideal type and you're good! Good luck! ☾
JOCELYN
THE ALL-ROUNDED
SHIKSHIN
smlover- - 2nd main dancer, 2nd lead vocalist - chinese / french - lee minho - zedd - bora - iu - naeun - n/a - jiyoung - liu shishi - accepted
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yuko's review - hello, hailey! ♡ great application, great character, great personality. i don't find anything wrong with your personality, except for her variety twin and her position. and lmao, minho kisses her to teach her how to do kissing scenes. i really like that tbh. just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! good luck! ♡
re's review - hello lovely hailey! ☾first of all i love your application, everything was nice and detailed. easy to read and enjoyable :), however i did spot some mistakes. firstly hyoyeon is my variety twin so can you change her? lastly you put your position and backup two times, pick one different position and change at least one of them. other than that, your application was great *thumbs up* just fix your mistakes and you're good! good luck! ☾
NANA
SWEET DONGSAENG
NANA
mitsukixiumin - 1st main dancer, sub-vocal - japanese / chinese - thunder - chen - suzy - taeyeon - amber - amber - lee hyori - hong young gi - mistakes
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yuko's review - hello, yui! ♡ first of all, thank you so much for applying. hanako is shooooo cute. i like how hanako is such a simple character. although, your application is short, it's detailed enough. don't worry c: so she used to learn break dancing, does this mean she know how? hanako is such a cutie, i want to pinch her cheeks. asdfghjkl. anyway, i've found some mistakes in your application. since, hanako is half japanese hald chinese, please choose a japanese or a chinese face claim. as i said in rules/cheatsheet, face claims can't be korean. second, you should be having back-ups. just in case, we want you to be in the story but your love interes / love rival / rival is taken by someone else, we'll use your back-up. so just fix hanako's face claim and add back-ups. that's all. ♡
re's review - hello lovely yui! ☾Nana is such an adorable and simple character, CAN I PInch her cheeks! So cute. Yes i seen the same mistakes, but you don't have a rapping position. Taeyeon is a main vocalist not sub-vocalist, amber isn't the main dancer nor does she have a dancing position. Eee i feel mean but fix your mistakes and you're good. Ouu thunder and chen /squeals/ suzy as your rival, ouu this should be good. Asdflgdfi, good luck!
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