Author's Note

Little Luhan

Hi Guys! so we have come to the end of Little Luhan. i have to admit that this whole Little Luhan journey has been a very hard one because i swear i have lots of writer's block for this fanfic. tbh, i never thought that this is one of my best written fanfic. it was horrible. and i didn't foresee it would end up this way.

 

and i actually noticed what is the problem with my writing. this fanfic made me realise the huge mistake and it is really thanks to you guys that i realised the mistake. well, i actually have this problem of only showing a one-person point of view and not both of my characters. lets take this fic as an example, i focused alot on Sehun's mistake and making him the reason for their fight and i actually did not make the other realise his innocence. i focused alot on making Luhan the innocent party because he was a contributing factor to the fight.

 

now that i noticed it, i have to admit that this whole fic was rushed and it wasn't planned nicely. and i MIGHT consider rewriting some parts of this fanfic. and i will definitely work on that mistake i made - the mistake wasnt only for Little Luhan but it was for my previous fanfics too.

 

laslty, thank you for your constant support because yes the comments are the reason why i am looking at things that i can improve myself in.

 

anyway, do support my new Baekyeol fanfic: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/818069

 

and follow me on twitter! https://twitter.com/_xoxokaisoo

 

ps: do you guys kind of realise that i actually like pink alot? HAHAHHAHAH.

 

THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT! ♡

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yousra_ #1
I remember stopping reading for no reasons in the middle of the story gonna re read this now!
shine_star
#2
Chapter 16: It's late... But why only Sehun is the one to blame for everything what ever is happened???
Minseok is enjoying everything like family love and care, while Sehun is left alone to sulk... Even Kai ignore him for good three months... In some way it shows double standards... From Soo part too
If you says it's Sehun’s anger, jealously or over-protectiveness... Then it's Minseok who provoke him in everyway possible... Minseok is one who bring dads and Luhan in between... Sehun just simply says stay away from Luhan....
It really make my eyes sweating... From personal experience it feel like hell to be left alone....:’(:’(:’(
banglo_
#4
Chapter 22: So late but really loved the story. Though, I would make Minseok less evil, I felt like his evilness gave them the opportunity to breathe and think carefully of their decisions. The break contributed to their happy life.
exo94sehun
#5
Chapter 22: This was a very emotional story... Beautifully written..... I enjoyed every chapter of it! Thank you so much authornim!! Keep up with the good work!
adorableGeez
#6
Chapter 14: I dont like minseok here. he is plain evil!!
Sehunnie99
#7
I'm going to re-read this <3
leeleeloveskpop #8
Chapter 22: I really love both of your fics in this series
leeleeloveskpop #9
Chapter 14: I love Minseok in real life not so much in this fic! Yes he has feelings for Luhan everyone can see that but he went too far when he said those things to Sehun calling him extra baggage and things like that. Thats cruel especially to do that to your own brother. While Sehun should not of hit Kyungsoo it really was an accident. I didnt like how everyone began to turn their backs on Sehun making him out to be the bad guy when Minseok was the one that provoked him in the first place