Chapter 1: I thought the story was very sweetly written! It's so sweet and beautiful I swear. The poetry-like stanzas are really sweet and warm. The description of the story is also very nice, simple yet elegant feeling. I like how realistic this feels. It gives me the perspective and thought of a person who is not able to see. It is really interesting... Good job done! I wish you all the best for your competition!

Chapter 1: I've never read such a beautifully written story ever before! This was definitely thought out & written so nicely. I didn't think such a oneshot could be so beautiful. I was able to feel everything about this story. I rarely say this, but this story will be kept in my heart. I've read and heard of many that speaks of how the world really is, but none that interests me, or none that left an impact on me, at least not as huge as this one has. Reading this was really refreshing, so thank you for taking the time to write this beautiful oneshot. Your writing was definitely amazing too and not just its content. Grammar & plot was on-point! I can't seem to give any advice or suggestions at all, because I find this to be as perfect as it is already. If ever, you're able to publish anything, really think about this one, because this is definitely a short story people need to read. Giving this one a sub & upvote, because, beautiful, you deserve it :')

Chapter 1: I really like how you played up the other senses. It was very beautifully written. I adore Luhan so I'm really looking forward to what kind of story you are going to tell. :]

Chapter 1: Wow, this story is so true. It really relates to our lifes :)
About how people judge others just on appearance
Good Luck for your contest :D

Chapter 1: OMG this is so amazing!! ^.^ <33 I seriously got a shiver when I read the last sentence omg!! This is one of the few fan fics that don't focus on romance and yet is so spectacularly amazing in making me smile so widely :D Thank you so much this beautiful oneshot has brightened up my day!! Good luck with the contest btw!! I'm sure you'll do great!! (: hwaiting!

Chapter 1: Wow. You really should win in the contest. I read this to my friend, who can't see. She cried. Because she thought this was an amazing story cx I aswell, think it's amazing. It has a great and meaningful message ^^ Fanfic's should be like this more often cx

Wow. Absolutely love this. I was sent here by a new acquaintance today, and I definitely agree that this story has a very great message.

I loved how, without even you having to literally write that Sora is blind, readers can tell straight away that she couldn't see. The way you put together the beauty of all the senses was also, truly amazing. It made me think about the beauty of this world too, no lie. And how unappreciative we can be while taking advantage of what we have. I especially love the last line. keke. <3333

Great job of this piece. It is truly a great work of literature. And I don't call every fanfic work 'literature'. Your story here just seems to have that x-factor in it ^^

Good luck on the contest (if it's not already over?). Haha. Hope you win bc this is art right here XD