Chapter 23

Meeting in the internet

A/N: I noticed that two of my minor characters havent been introduced yet .. Sorry .. No worries .. in a few chaps you will :)

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[RECAP]

" ermm... I asked her out but she rejected me " Taemin said

" Well.. i have my reasons! " Ri rin said

" And yes.. when i was about to go i leave korea .. he stopped me " Ri rin added

Awww .. thats sweet..

[END OF RECAP]

KEY'S POV:

Aisshhh! So annoying!

Everyone has a girlfriend!

I looked at my laptop and i pressed the power button

Should i or should i not???

Nothing's wrong right?

i clicked register and create an account

Username*: blingblingman

Password*: oooooooo

Confirm Password*: oooooooo

Email*: [email protected]

Oh yeaa~ you see that? almighty key!

Hehehehehe~

Then i saw alot of stories about me and some of the story was !

and guess what with who?

With JONGHYUN!?

ewwwww~ with that erted mind guy

Then i saw a nice one...

Its about me who is gentle - i am

strict umma - true

but then my eyes widened

erted - NOT SO TRUE!

Its freakin jonghyun MAN!

Theres another one but im minor though

Its about this girls who likes onew and they are "BESTFRIENDS" and doesnt know that they both like each other..

Hmmm.. Very interesting...

So i clicked subscribe and read more

While i was reading i saw Wall Post!

i clicked it and it shows

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:15:41 says: Thanks for subscribing

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:16:41 says: your welcome! :) i like your story!

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:17:41 says: I am glad you liked it :D

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:18:41 says: Where do you live?

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:19:41 says: England you?

Did she just type england??!

Its well far! its not even in this country!

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:20:41 says: Korea :)

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:21:41 says: Really? Cool :D i wanted to live in korea..

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:22:41 says: Really? Why dont you then? I bet your old enough to live here?

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:23:41 says: I cant :( My parents are strict ..

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:24:41 says: Too bad .. What is your name?

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:25:41 says: Mary but in korea my name is Park Joo chan you?

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:26:41 says: Me? My name is Kim Kibum

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:27:41 says: Kim kibum is very popular name is Korea...

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:28:41 says: It is :) how old are you?

JOOCHAN'S POV:

Its been awhile since ive been talking to this guy called Kim kibum

And he is been asking me alot of things

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:28:41 says: It is :) how old are you?

OH GAWD!

ragnamary [block] on 10-18-2010 21:29:41 says: I am 18 you?

i lied acutally, i am 15

Almighty_Key [block] on 10-18-2010 21:30:41 says: cool :) i am 19 :D

4 years older than me!

 

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rukiblood
#1
i read chapter 1 through 4. You need more description in your writing. Too much dialogue. Other than that and the grammatical mistaks, It's okay.<br />
Keep practicing. Try to avoid the iphone, and if you can't, use the iphone version as a draft and then edit it on a computer.
thediva_18 #2
update soon :D
rainismlove #3
lmao at key and ragnamary<the author> :))
MySHINee #4
lol
Littlemagnaemary
#5
thanks! :DD
p-ocketsunshine
#6
new reader here~<br />
i dunno why but i laughed when i read about how shinee members interact with the girls.<br />
haha.<br />
update soon! :D
jokingeunniee #7
i think i'm gonna puke ~~~ *fake puke* keke ^^<br />
too much lovey-dovey! <br />
OMONA!!!!! poor Taeminnie ~<br />
meanie Key!!!!!!!!! *gives Key a punch in the face* ahaha :D<br />
update soon
Littlemagnaemary
#8
LOL! i know XDD<br />
same! :DD
MySHINee #9
haha! key has a girlfriend! now i'm gonna think eberyone i know here that has an account of "jonghyun", "keyzha", taemin'slittlesecret" (all real accounts) or something like that may be one of the SHINee memebers... THANKS A LOT >.<' =)) KIDDING! i would die if i knew that! (#^.^#)
-Kiseu
#10
AAAAAAAAAAAA~~ freakin love it.. AFF acc?? good one~~ LOVE almighty_key <3