Chapter 21

Meeting in the internet

A/N: I think this will be finish like 5 chaps?  or more??or less??dunno... but once i got introduced this will be finish :)

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[RECAP]

After school...

i went to the park and called my ARROGANT--BOYFRIEND

[End of RECAP]

" Yeobosaeyo? " he answered

I can hear there is a girl next to him

But i dont care.

" Its me, Rae " i said"

" Oh its you " he said " Do you need anything? "

" Meet me at the park " i said and hang up

i tapped my phone for a while

I am nervous...

Please GAWD! Be on my side!

After a few minutes he arrived

" Hey " he said and i turned around

" Lets Break Up" i said seriously

" Huh.. Joke? Well.. Sorry i dont have time for this " he said

" Sorry.. but im not " i said and walked out

But he stopped me and hold me wrisk tightly

" Why? " he asked angily

" Yaa.. Its hurts! " I said trying to break free but he is too strong

" NO! Tell me WHY?! " he shouted at me and i got more even scared

MINHO'S POV:

I am soooo BORED!

Then i looked at the laptop.

GAWD MINHO!

I sighed and walked outside

" Hyung~ Where are you going? " Taemin asked

" Getting some fresh air "i  said

" Oh~ Take care! " Taemin said

I walked out the door

The wind blew in m hair and i inhaled the air

Sooo FRESH~~~

I started walking and found myslef heading to the park.

Then i heard a familiar voice and a guy's voice.

I followed the voices and there

i saw Rae Ah with a guy holding her wrisk

" Its hurts! " Rae shouted

" TELL ME WHY?! " the guy shouted

I couldnt take it anymore so i walked over him and pushed him

" Who the are you?! " the guy shouted

" Her friend " i said

" Got out of our bussiness " he shouted

" THERE IS NOTHING BETWEEN US ANYMORE! " Rae shouted and i looked at her.

She was crying and i started to panic.

" WHY DO YOU WANT TO BREAK UP WITH ME?! " the guy shouted

Huh? So he is her boyfriend

My blood is now really boiling like lava

" Why do you even care?! You only want my popularity! so now! its enough! " Rae shouted and the guy chuckled

" Huh? Thats all? Well, okay.. since that im popular enough " he said and walked away.

She fell on her kneels and i stood infront of her and took my hands out.

I smiled at her and she took my hands

" Thanks " she said quietly and wiped her tears

" Are you okay? " i asked

" yes.. " Rae said

" You sure? You just broke up with him " i said

" Like i care.. i just went out with him because he want to get famous " she answered and i nodded

" Minho? " Rae said and i looked at her

" Uhmm... Nothing " she said and walked away.

But before she walk away...

i held her hand and turned her around.

" Rae... Will you give me another chance? " i asked

I dont know why i said that but i guess i just followed my heart?

" Yes... " Rae said and she smiled

" Thank you " i said and i pulled her and kissed her

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rukiblood
#1
i read chapter 1 through 4. You need more description in your writing. Too much dialogue. Other than that and the grammatical mistaks, It's okay.<br />
Keep practicing. Try to avoid the iphone, and if you can't, use the iphone version as a draft and then edit it on a computer.
thediva_18 #2
update soon :D
rainismlove #3
lmao at key and ragnamary<the author> :))
MySHINee #4
lol
Littlemagnaemary
#5
thanks! :DD
p-ocketsunshine
#6
new reader here~<br />
i dunno why but i laughed when i read about how shinee members interact with the girls.<br />
haha.<br />
update soon! :D
jokingeunniee #7
i think i'm gonna puke ~~~ *fake puke* keke ^^<br />
too much lovey-dovey! <br />
OMONA!!!!! poor Taeminnie ~<br />
meanie Key!!!!!!!!! *gives Key a punch in the face* ahaha :D<br />
update soon
Littlemagnaemary
#8
LOL! i know XDD<br />
same! :DD
MySHINee #9
haha! key has a girlfriend! now i'm gonna think eberyone i know here that has an account of "jonghyun", "keyzha", taemin'slittlesecret" (all real accounts) or something like that may be one of the SHINee memebers... THANKS A LOT >.<' =)) KIDDING! i would die if i knew that! (#^.^#)
-Kiseu
#10
AAAAAAAAAAAA~~ freakin love it.. AFF acc?? good one~~ LOVE almighty_key <3