Don't Make Me Fall

Description

His eyes, his smile. Those dimples. That voice.

And most of all, his personality. They captivate me. But I don't want to fall.

No, I can't fall.

 

I'm too scared to fall.

 

-**-~*~-**-~*~-**-

 

Those sparkling black eyes. I can never tell what lies behind them. But I've seen it once. The fear. What is it that she is so afraid of? I heard her mumbling in her sleep the other night. She was crying for her mother. Then she suddenly said in the most clear, venomous voice - I nearly thought she wasn't asleep - "You monster."


note: This story is something i wrote for the Haruman Writing Competition (organized by exoticangl) some time ago

Foreword

She stumbles across the cold street, dragging her numb feet along with her. The migraine hits her like a tsunami wave and she falls to the freezing pavement, gasping for breath. She catches a soft glow coming from the window of the house to her right. She stares at it for a few moments, enchanted. 'Should I?' she debates with herself. She feels a little dizzy and decides this isn't the time to be shy. 

'Let's just hope I don't faint before reaching the darn door,' she thinks. 

A/N: this ff contains some explicit language.

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to actual incidences or people are purely coincidental.

Note: I have rewritten this piece of writing to be uploaded on wattpad. if you see it there, don't be alarmed. it's me, no one stole it. thank you for all your support

Kuro_Wol
just to update, this fic didn't win the competition. no, im not sad. im perfectly fine. /sobs hysterically/ lol jk. pls continue supporting it anyway! love u~.

Comments

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LeeSungChan073
#1
I like the plot. Haha. Namjoon and Yi Fan in one story? WOW.
iamangeline
#2
Chapter 7: hopefully you win next time :) you did a great job! Keep improving!
azure_bliss
#3
Chapter 7: Lol unnie what?!
You read my newest chappie didn't you? xD
Thank you so much unnie, I appreciate it so much! BUt we both who's the star here. /grins/
You have officially make me feel bad by the way. Let me slap myself for not bombing your comments because Imma a lazy dongsaeng. Muahahaha. /slapped/kicked/punched.

/Survives the beating/
I'll make sure to drop bombs when I'm not so...Lazy. Kay? xD
Don't Make Me Fall lost pathetically? Are you serious unnie? There were like 32 entries. Give yourself some credit xD
I sure will :)
iamangeline
#4
Chapter 6: A sequel please~:3 I hope she and Namjoon...you know....*pushes hands together in gesture*
zook26
#5
Chapter 5: Finally finished it! It was a great plot and loved it! Thanks for sharing your story with me :)
azure_bliss
#6
-Yo, Haziq here...NOT!
Just dropping off a comment cause...I love comments and I know that you love them too hurm?
Haven't read the story thoroughly yet, will get started...Tomorrow? Sbb kena bangun sahur so kena tidur sekarang hee. :D
Even though I only went through this just briefly, what I can say is...DAMN unnie! The plot is so unique wow O.O

Yoongi would so proud of you.
Or should it be Namjoon?
Hoseok?

See? This is why you can only pick one. XD
iamangeline
#7
Chapter 1: Wow, and I thought my writing was good. 0_0 and OMG, my nickname is Angie!!!