Sorry guise

I'm really, really, sorry, and I'm sure you guys are gonna hate me for this, but idk if I'm ever going to pick up this story again anytime soon. To be honest, I hadn't really thought out the story, and it was more or less a spur of the moment kind of fic. When school got in the way, I forgot where I was going with it tbh. I know, I'm a horrible, horrible author, but I'm still not very well-versed in the ways of the author. Honestly, this was my first fanfic ever, so I'm proud I managed to get at least 5 chapters out. I don't think I'll pick this back up again, but if I do, I suppose that will be a happy surprise, huh? Again, I'm really, really sorry, and I hope that you'll forgive me!

I guess that if you read my other fics, I'll leave a note on one of the other ones, but as for this one, it's dead as far as I can tell, and I'm really sorry, but I lost inspiration, and idk if I'm gonna get it back. I'll miss you guys on this! ;-;

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Eternitystars #1 Jan 9, 2015 04:30:18

Chapter 11: It's fine!!! We will wait patiently and let our imaginations take over for the mean time! Good luck with school!!!!

LycheeJelly #2 Sep 20, 2014 12:30:25

Chapter 8: The hunt for Myungsoo continues. /o/ Take your time with writing! Good luck with school. ^^

LycheeJelly #3 Jun 17, 2014 14:17:38

Chapter 6: ??????? NO WHY WILL THEY HAVE TROUBLE MEETING. I am assuming that it will take quite awhile for Sungjong to realize that L is Myungsoo. But at least now they can fall in love without the eye thing. ;^;

aozora7 #4 Jun 16, 2014 02:40:05

Chapter 6: aaacccckkk what is this!! update soon authornim, sungjong has finally met the owner of the distractive eyes, i want to know what happen next ;~;

LycheeJelly #5 Jun 12, 2014 15:32:49

Chapter 4: I just started reading. It's really well-written! ;v; I hate that Jongie's health is taking such a huge hit from just someone's eyes. The normally strong boy is now very much out of it. :( I can't say I can relate, as someone who.. lacks that kind of feeling haha. But hopefully he meets Myungsoo soon! I'm glad he finally told one of his hyungs about it.

Also, I just wanted to say that I can relate to your 4th anniversary message so much. I didn't get into INFINITE until The Chaser so I haven't been with them very long. I do really love them now though, and they'll always be my number one. The same applies to Sungjong. INFINITE definitely helps me relax and stay motivated as well. >v< Hopefully you graduated happily~

Ninjajin #6 Jun 7, 2014 04:26:08

Chapter 2: I like the way you write :)
I feel like I relate to Sungjong in a way haha.
But I have a suggestion though, when the characters are speaking in dialogue, I think the squiggly line shouldn't be used a lot. Sorry, I'm not trying to sound harsh or anything, I hope you can understand ><
Anyway, your first attempt at fanfiction isn't bad at all, keep it up :) (btw i'm not a graphics person because I but you could try requesting one from a graphics shop)

greenpixies #7 Jun 7, 2014 01:33:43

Chapter 2: Loving your plot so far~ Keep it up! ★★★★★

AdrianaInspirit #8 Jun 6, 2014 22:46:05

Omg u￻pdate soon <3 <3 <3

ajs787 #9 Jun 6, 2014 09:23:55

ok, first of all, congrats on your 1st attempt at writing ff!! Though it's kinda early to make judgement on your story, as a reader, i think it has potential. Please continue!
as for a critique, i generaly like your style, kinda dry, which is quite contrasting to the subject of lovesickness (which is cool imo, it fits SJ's personality to some extent). Still maybe you'd consider adding a little bit of records on SJ's emotions. It would help to liven up the story imo. Not those angsty, wailing or even poetic type of emotions, but just like SJ himself, more analytical and introspective. LIke asking himself, what it is he likes abt those mysterious eyes? How it connects to his endorphine-releasing mechanism? (lol, jkng)
Also, I just thought it'd show more of his struggle if you put smth to indicate the number of his current letter draft (which should be at least 2-digit number ^^)!
Sorry, I don't even write myself, but here I am, bothering you ^^ Good luck!