My World

Description

For me, my world is not the star which be called The Earth; but someone who has a little dream; across from his responsibility to rule his people, his kingdom. Someone who has a kind-heart and love living peacefully; which across from his position to lead his ten-thousands of man-at-arms to kill the enemies, who come to usurp his home. 

 

 

Foreword

This is very one-shot fiction more like one scene? (about 1K words).
It's a story of Yifan and Zitao in some old era of China which was told in Zitao's point of view. They were having a war with some of minorities that gathered themselves together and stood up agianst Yifan's kingdom.

I don't good at English much and I do not have anyone to beta my grammar or missspelling or word using. SO, please let me know if it has some mistakes. :) 

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VEloneY
#1
Chapter 1: it's great!! two top thumbs d(~_^)b
chrysantslurvletters
#2
Chapter 1: I love it!! It's my favourite genre really..historical maybe? Haha..my suggestion if you can't fine anyone to beta your story, use online grammar checkers..it's quite efficient...not that I can find any mistake here since I enjoy it so much..hehe
YiFan-dom
#3
Chapter 1: Gosh! It amazing!
Its a lovestory within the wars haha
Am I making sense? Haha Nice author-nim :))
singsongsungjong #4
I loved this! Wow!