Sequel

Steal (My Heart)

I made a sequel - well, kind of. I just started it, but I've been getting ideas for it like crazy because they keep moving me around at work and the inspiration is overwhelming sometimes (and then I lose most of it as the day goes on). If only I had more time to work on it;;

Anyways, here's a link to the sequel if you want to check it out. All I've got for now is a short prologue to start with.

Also, I didn't win in the contests - the competition was tough! I did get an honorable mention though~

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(whispers of definite sequel - for Luhan)
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stargirl19 #1
Ha ha Lu Han judging Tao as super klepto when he is in fact such a stalker. Cute story! :)
EXOternity #2
Chapter 2: found it from annie's contest and it's cute and weird af~ <3
JAYKAIT #3
Chapter 1: That was so adorable it like change my life <3
aldrusy #4
Chapter 1: I don't really ship them but dem. ;; it's so cutee <3
ExtremeACRepairman #5
Chapter 1: this is so sweet~
nightStar #6
Chapter 1: awwww
my first TaoHan..
good
nicorobin #7
Chapter 1: Congratulation for the honorable mention on explosion writing contest! :D
I found your story through the contest and I have to say I totally enjoy this story, I like Luhan's personality and how you write him. Now I'm thinking of reading your other stories c:
Thank you for writing this!
nomnomninja #8
Chapter 1: Wow, that was the cutest thing I'd read in a very long time. I don't even...
Too cute. I'm squeeing just thinking about their feelings and the mutual stalking :P
Isadora_Quagmire #9
Chapter 1: Oh my glob Tao is so pretty when he's all shy yeeeeee~
Amalya #10
Chapter 1: This was a really fun little read and far more nuanced with the subtleties of emotions and relationships than I would have guessed at first glance, given the comedic nature of it. I really enjoyed how you managed to keep their characters true to themselves throughout and Luhan's indignation the majority of the time was just hilarious.

I also enjoyed how you made Tao's habit mostly unconscious. That was a nice little twist with a rather heartbreaking background story to boot. Well played there, and rather logical all things considered. lol Tao himself was ridiculously cute being all shy and... well, him.

Personally, I found Luhan's cursing amusing and there were definitely several points I laughed and/or chuckled out loud. ^_^ So very good job there. You've a deft hand with comedy and I applaud you for that. I also cracked up that they were both pretty much stalking each other. heh Silly boys. The gentleman/prince charming sort of lens for Tao was almost too cheesy until you hear the rest of his story and it makes a bit more sense. I think it also becomes more acceptable with how he accepted growing up and trying to be more helpful to his family.

You had me too at Lay's prank, though I appreciated Jongdae's response when he found out Luhan's nature. Not that I didn't want to smack Lay (who's kind of an here too haha). The rags to riches tale isn't anything new per se but it was definitely handled neatly here. I'll give you credit for that. ^_^ Plus, the ending appeals to the sappy romantic in me and that was just beautiful. <3

So overall, a very enjoyable read. I'm glad I stopped by to check it out. I'm also in the 5 Senses contest so I figured I'd see what else people were working on. Good job though and good luck in the competition!
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