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The Institute

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kibum left the Academy library at around half three in the morning, rubbing the ache at the base of his spine. He trudged through the corridors of the old building and began making his journey to bed. It was calling his name, he could hear it.

He peered into the different rooms as he passed them though they were all dark. However, as he got closer to the exit, he was surprised one of the surveillance rooms completely lit up with commotion. A dozen regular agents were in there and crowding round a row of computers. Kibum rubbed at his sleep filled eyes and continued to stare through the glass door, his tired brain trying to catch up with what was he could see. As he processed the information before him and his telekinesis woke up a little, he began to pick up information and found himself quietly slipping into the room.

He was too far away to see what was on the computers and began to move closer, only to be startled by the big screen flaring into life. One of the agents was projecting the footage that was causing such a hubbub. Kibum watched a CCTV video play out although nothing appeared to be happening for a while. Then a tall figure came into view, walking down the alley in the shot. All of a sudden, three other men jumped up behind him and wrestled him to the ground. He tried to put up a fight but they overpowered him and then one pulled out a knife.

The thug rammed the blade into the poor guy’s chest and then took off with his cronies. Kibum sighed, feeling distressed by the needless violence. He was just about to leave the surveillance room when the regular agents started to raise their voices again and point at the screen. Kibum narrowed his eyes, not understanding what was so fascinating but then he gasped. The figure in the video began to crumble into ash, his body disintegrating where he lay and sure enough, within moments the ash burst into flame from which arose the same man as before. Kibum stared, wide-eyed and slack-jawed.

They had found another phoenix.

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vandarkrose
#1
Chapter 25: Okay, so I don't think one can describe this story with words. But I'm going to try anyway.
So, after reading the first chapter I was already so captured that I was sure that this was going to be one of my favorite fanfictions (which, yes, it ended up being). This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read, it's written so well and I also noticed how realistic it was. Your writing transports the reader into another world, a world they will not be able to escape from until the chapter is finished.
I also loved how you used more technical terms like lycanthrope. I had to look it up, but it just made the story that much more real for me. Another thing I enjoyed was the subtle hints at things like Heechul looking at his razor for just one moment too long.
My heart also really went out for the characters. These were people who had suffered, who had had traumatic experiences and you could see that they were not healed yet. But they all tried so hard to stay alive and to fight whatever might come their way.
I could say so much more about this, but I'm going to end this comment here with the statement that I am so excited and can't wait for the sequel!!!
Annroy89 #2
Chapter 23: Ah I don’t even know how to describe how i’ am feeling after reading this but this was really a good plot that you carried through so brilliantly! I do hope you write more :)
amuse_otaku #3
Chapter 25: Hiii omg I just came back after hiatus *commenting lol* for months and found out my favorite story is complete, what a bittersweet, i love this story, thanks so much .. Well I guess sequel will be a good idea hahaa,, hwaiting ^^
Holymotherofduck
#4
Chapter 23: Ah this was so long and entertaining. That final battle was awesome especially with hannie coming back. Yay Phoenix haha.
Thankyou for writing it x
kyuminsauce
#5
Chapter 24: super great story!!
KakanN #6
Chapter 24: Thanks for a great story ! <3 I really enjoy reading it ~
Prom15e-to-13elieve #7
Chapter 19: Love this story so much I reread it for the 15th time aha will you be updating? I cant wait!!!!!!!!
Prom15e-to-13elieve #8
Chapter 20: Ohmygod Hangeng and kyuhyun damn please let kyuhyun be fine !! And oh no what's Heechul going to do without Hangeng? This fic is really good and it's totally fine with me if you don't update as frequently so long as you never stop writing cause I love it soooo much !! Great chapter btw!! :)
amuse_otaku #9
Chapter 20: HanChul got this close! So eager to see their relationship.. and Kyu!! He's awake and he will be alright !! The development, I love it and even love it if you plan to make a longer chapter so it will worth the wait , thanxxx for updating! Keep up the good work!