The Replacement Plan

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Minho and his best friend Taeyeon were two peas in a pod or in other words, inseparable. But the she is mysterious murdered with no leads to the murders, but Minho thinks she is missing. Because of this traumatic event Minho goes to depression and doesn’t plan on getting better. Minho’s parents(the queen and king) try anything but, nothing worked, then they met Taemin. Taemin was identical to Taeyeon, just with a little more muscular features. Minho’s parents buy Taemin from his parents and make him look like Taeyeon, which wasn’t that hard, for the better of Minho. But will everything go according to plan or will it come crashing down?

Foreword

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Taemin/Taeyeon(same person)- A bright 17 year old that would do anything for his family even if it's being sold away and force to be someone else.

Minho- The 19 year old prince of SHINee world who is depressed by Taeyeon's dissapperance. But past that you see a man who has flaming charisma and a man who cares about anybody he's close too.

Key- 1 out of 3 people that know that Taemin is actually a dude. Really caring personality but with the help of his divaness he can get overprotective easily and can put up a fight if needed. Jonghyun and Onew are his boyfriends

Onew(Jinki)- The king's right hand man who also knows about Taemin's true gender. Has a soft personality but can change quickly to become a tough one, which both Key and Jonghyun faced since he is dating them.

Jonghyun- He is Minho's right mand man and a great friend when needed. Has a small temper problem but he is loveable as a puppy, you learn to love him. Also, just like his boyfriends he know about Taemin.

(OC)- Choi Joo-Min> Don't let that face trick you ;)

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Hope you'll like it though.

Opinions about story???

Imma start typing on my computer so I can upload easier and faster, hope it's worth the wait.

Poster provided by animaeholic

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Shining_Hotaru_25 #1 Nov 11, 2014 11:58:40

Chapter 6: Interesting~ I can see that you really tried to make it better and that you indeed applied some tips and advices- that's good! that means you're on the right path, all you have to do now is practice your skill and your writing will only get better;)
Also remember that YOU should be the first person to like your creation, so if you're not quite sure about the final result, turn back and rebuild it until you really feel it's perfect (at least from your point of view) ^_^
Try to be more careful in the proofreading process, since too many mistakes could make readers confused about a certain situation from your story.
It's okay, keep writing and doing what you like and you'll get better and better ^~^

Shining_Hotaru_25 #2 Aug 17, 2014 18:30:09

Chapter 5: Hmm...this could be quite promising...i mean, the plot is indeed very interesting ^^ (the reason for me reading until here and even commenting) but i do feel that everything is developing too fast and one chapter is gone in a blink of an eye :(
Ways to improve?( 'cause, yes, of course you can~ ;) ) i would suggest, first of all, a greater amount of attention on the details- the descriptions- you tend to overlook them and go almost straight through the action. Here you could insist more on the characters, describe their actions, feelings thoroughly( maybe add in some "surprise"-elements too, why not? Something to get us puzzled for a moment or more), and, finally, using their surroundings/the environment could be a good idea too. It's all about the details and the way you combine them on your paper :) i hope at least a bit of what i said here will come in handy to you..
idk, this is just what i personally felt it was missing from this story :D you can take it or not into consideration ;)
Anyway, i'm quite curious about what's going to happen next and how the next chapter will look like! so good luck with that author-nim! ^_^

[oh my gosh what a long comment!! >_< aish; sorry 'bout that]

Beibydhe #3 Jun 21, 2014 10:29:19

Chapter 4: can't wait for more..

mine52 #4 Jun 19, 2014 02:46:44

Chapter 4: omo i love the whole plot of the story though its short i felt upset hehe
more 2min feels ohoho
cant wait for the next chapter excited herexD..
authoornim daebak keep it up fighting!.

canarydreams #5 Jun 19, 2014 01:46:34

Chapter 4: The pair of shoes is fab! I bet Taemin's y in that dress. Lolz

Beibydhe #6 Apr 30, 2014 16:00:10

Chapter 3: poor tae has to give up his life, family and everything..
just hope their plan will turn out well..
can't wait to see how their first encounter will be..
thanks for updating..
update soon authornim ^^

canarydreams #7 Apr 23, 2014 19:33:01

Omo OnJongKey are in a relationship. Whatta surprise!

canarydreams #8 Apr 21, 2014 08:00:28

So when Taeyeon was murdered it was near the palace?

It was pretty fun that Taemin didn't realize he was speaking with the royals haha so cute.

And about the poster... I'll make something. Just don't expect though. I like your story to continue so I 'll try to make a decent one haha

jellee #9 Apr 21, 2014 01:55:43

Chapter 1: This is very interesting. I can't wait to see how Taemin is going to react to being told to act as a girl and then Minho to see Taeyeon again. :P