Chapter 4

The Replacement Plan
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Chapter 4

Taemin POV

“Yah!” I yelled as I got the blanket off of me. “What was that for?!”

“I’m sorry, but you got to be kept a secret from the prince until the ball.” Jessica said

“Oh…When is the ball?” I asked “At 8pm” Jessica replied

“But it’s only 3 right now, why do I need to get ready now” I whined

“Do you know how to walk in heels” Yuri asked and I looked down mumbling a ‘no’

“Then you need practice so that’s why it’s so early” Yuri stated

“Can I see the dress?” I asked hesitantly and scared to see it.

“Later, when you are all set and know how to act like a lady.” Jessica said

“Fine.” I mumbled and let them finish me

------4 hours later----------

“You look so pretty Taemin.” Key cooed

“Never seen a guy look that cute and y at the same time.” Jonghyun said wide eyed

“Yah! Shush it’s embarrassing.” I whined

“You just need one more thing” Key said sizing me up then snapping his fingers. He left and minutes later he came back with a tiara.

“A princess needs her crown” Key said putting the tiara on me, the Onew came in.

“Guys we need to go to the par-Woah” Onew said finally looking at Taemin

“What hyung?” Taemin asked

“You really do look like Taeyeon, but better” he said with a small smirk

“I know” Jonghyun said going by Onew who put his arm around his waist

I blushed “Hyunggs, don’t say that!!” I whined

“It’s the truth” Jonghyun said and I rolled my eyes

“Let’s get through this.” I murmured sadly

 

Minho’s POV

“Ummaaaa~ Can I leave early?” I asked

“Sorry Minho not today, we got a surprise fo

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Shining_Hotaru_25 #1
Chapter 6: Interesting~ I can see that you really tried to make it better and that you indeed applied some tips and advices- that's good! that means you're on the right path, all you have to do now is practice your skill and your writing will only get better;)
Also remember that YOU should be the first person to like your creation, so if you're not quite sure about the final result, turn back and rebuild it until you really feel it's perfect (at least from your point of view) ^_^
Try to be more careful in the proofreading process, since too many mistakes could make readers confused about a certain situation from your story.
It's okay, keep writing and doing what you like and you'll get better and better ^~^
Shining_Hotaru_25 #2
Chapter 5: Hmm...this could be quite promising...i mean, the plot is indeed very interesting ^^ (the reason for me reading until here and even commenting) but i do feel that everything is developing too fast and one chapter is gone in a blink of an eye :(
Ways to improve?( 'cause, yes, of course you can~ ;) ) i would suggest, first of all, a greater amount of attention on the details- the descriptions- you tend to overlook them and go almost straight through the action. Here you could insist more on the characters, describe their actions, feelings thoroughly( maybe add in some "surprise"-elements too, why not? Something to get us puzzled for a moment or more), and, finally, using their surroundings/the environment could be a good idea too. It's all about the details and the way you combine them on your paper :) i hope at least a bit of what i said here will come in handy to you..
idk, this is just what i personally felt it was missing from this story :D you can take it or not into consideration ;)
Anyway, i'm quite curious about what's going to happen next and how the next chapter will look like! so good luck with that author-nim! ^_^

[oh my gosh what a long comment!! >_< aish; sorry 'bout that]
Beibydhe #3
Chapter 4: can't wait for more..
mine52 #4
Chapter 4: omo i love the whole plot of the story though its short i felt upset hehe
more 2min feels ohoho
cant wait for the next chapter excited herexD..
authoornim daebak keep it up fighting!.
canarydreams #5
Chapter 4: The pair of shoes is fab! I bet Taemin's y in that dress. Lolz
Beibydhe #6
Chapter 3: poor tae has to give up his life, family and everything..
just hope their plan will turn out well..
can't wait to see how their first encounter will be..
thanks for updating..
update soon authornim ^^
canarydreams #7
Omo OnJongKey are in a relationship. Whatta surprise!
canarydreams #8
So when Taeyeon was murdered it was near the palace?

It was pretty fun that Taemin didn't realize he was speaking with the royals haha so cute.

And about the poster... I'll make something. Just don't expect though. I like your story to continue so I 'll try to make a decent one haha
jellee #9
Chapter 1: This is very interesting. I can't wait to see how Taemin is going to react to being told to act as a girl and then Minho to see Taeyeon again. :P
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