Chapter 2

The Replacement Plan
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Chapter 2

               Taemin couldn’t stop sobbing which made the queen break down in tears and rush to her room, while the king was getting a tad bit impatient with this teen’s sobs. So, he called his guard to get one of the personal servants for the teen. Minutes later a young man came out with fierce feline eyes and with blonde hair tussled lightly in the middle. “Key, can you this lad to the room in the basement.” The king told Key. The said man bowed and mumbled a ‘yes your highness,” then dragging taking Taemin to the room in the basement. When they arrived at the door which was huge but had many locks on it, Taemin started shaking. Key noticed this and hurried in the room and placed Taemin on the bed, where Taemin curled into a ball, sobbing. Key felt the urge to protect this boy, but he doesn’t know from what, so he hugged the boy and said soothing words to calm the boy down. After a couple minutes Taemin calmed down and fell asleep but Key heard him mumble “...umma” which made him smile. After that he left the room and went to talks to his boyfriends.

 

“Onew-hyung~” Key practically sang.

“Yes yeobo?~”Onew sang back. Key pecked him on the lips and sat on his bed which was between two others; Onew’s being the right one

“Do you know why the cute little kid is here...Tae..min? I believe.” Key asked

“Yeah...he’s gonna crossdress and pretend to be Taeyeon for Minho and the Kingdom” Onew said cautiously when he saw Key’s eyes widened.

“The king took away everything from that boy, just for Minho and the Kingdom?” Key asked lowly.

One gulped but nodded because he knows how Key gets.

“HOW CAN HE DO THAT TO A CH

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Shining_Hotaru_25 #1
Chapter 6: Interesting~ I can see that you really tried to make it better and that you indeed applied some tips and advices- that's good! that means you're on the right path, all you have to do now is practice your skill and your writing will only get better;)
Also remember that YOU should be the first person to like your creation, so if you're not quite sure about the final result, turn back and rebuild it until you really feel it's perfect (at least from your point of view) ^_^
Try to be more careful in the proofreading process, since too many mistakes could make readers confused about a certain situation from your story.
It's okay, keep writing and doing what you like and you'll get better and better ^~^
Shining_Hotaru_25 #2
Chapter 5: Hmm...this could be quite promising...i mean, the plot is indeed very interesting ^^ (the reason for me reading until here and even commenting) but i do feel that everything is developing too fast and one chapter is gone in a blink of an eye :(
Ways to improve?( 'cause, yes, of course you can~ ;) ) i would suggest, first of all, a greater amount of attention on the details- the descriptions- you tend to overlook them and go almost straight through the action. Here you could insist more on the characters, describe their actions, feelings thoroughly( maybe add in some "surprise"-elements too, why not? Something to get us puzzled for a moment or more), and, finally, using their surroundings/the environment could be a good idea too. It's all about the details and the way you combine them on your paper :) i hope at least a bit of what i said here will come in handy to you..
idk, this is just what i personally felt it was missing from this story :D you can take it or not into consideration ;)
Anyway, i'm quite curious about what's going to happen next and how the next chapter will look like! so good luck with that author-nim! ^_^

[oh my gosh what a long comment!! >_< aish; sorry 'bout that]
Beibydhe
#3
Chapter 4: can't wait for more..
mine52 #4
Chapter 4: omo i love the whole plot of the story though its short i felt upset hehe
more 2min feels ohoho
cant wait for the next chapter excited herexD..
authoornim daebak keep it up fighting!.
canarydreams
#5
Chapter 4: The pair of shoes is fab! I bet Taemin's y in that dress. Lolz
Beibydhe
#6
Chapter 3: poor tae has to give up his life, family and everything..
just hope their plan will turn out well..
can't wait to see how their first encounter will be..
thanks for updating..
update soon authornim ^^
canarydreams
#7
Omo OnJongKey are in a relationship. Whatta surprise!
canarydreams
#8
So when Taeyeon was murdered it was near the palace?

It was pretty fun that Taemin didn't realize he was speaking with the royals haha so cute.

And about the poster... I'll make something. Just don't expect though. I like your story to continue so I 'll try to make a decent one haha
jellee #9
Chapter 1: This is very interesting. I can't wait to see how Taemin is going to react to being told to act as a girl and then Minho to see Taeyeon again. :P