Chapter 5

The Replacement Plan
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Chapter 5

“Tae?...”

3rd POV

“H-hi Min…” Taemin said softly but nervously.

“Is it really you Tae?” Minho said rushing up to ‘her’.

“Y-yea it is” Taemin said with a smile then out of nowhere Minho had brought his lips to ‘hers’. ‘Her’ eyes widened at the action but closed to make it look real to the audience’s eyes and Minho’s. As they separated Minho hugged ‘her’ and he notice his suit getting wet. He looked at ‘Taeyeon’ and placed a kiss under the eye. “Please don’t cry Tae.” Minho said worriedly. “No it’s fine Minho, they are tears of j-joy.” ‘She replied’

But the real reason ‘she’ was crying is because Minho took Taemin’s first kiss which he wanted to save for that special person.

“Now children, let’s celebrate for now then you can have your alone time.” Nichkhun said with a small chuckle. “Yes Father” Minho said with a bright smile which everyone missed so much.

            Tiffany was as happy as she could ever be for her son, see him with that bright smile as he help ‘Taeyeon’ close and danced with ‘her’, she even saw some tears leak through Minho’s eyes, but even with all this happiness, it couldn’t get rid of the guilt she had for Taemin and his family. She wanted to do something for Taemin. “Key, I need your assistance for a while.” Tiffany called out.

            After the ball everyone left and Minho brought ‘Taeyeon’ to his room cause even though he’s glad she’s back, he needs answers. In the other hand, Taemin knew that this was going to happen but he was still extremely nervous.

Flashback

“So, Minho would probably ask you question.” Jonghyun sai

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Shining_Hotaru_25 #1
Chapter 6: Interesting~ I can see that you really tried to make it better and that you indeed applied some tips and advices- that's good! that means you're on the right path, all you have to do now is practice your skill and your writing will only get better;)
Also remember that YOU should be the first person to like your creation, so if you're not quite sure about the final result, turn back and rebuild it until you really feel it's perfect (at least from your point of view) ^_^
Try to be more careful in the proofreading process, since too many mistakes could make readers confused about a certain situation from your story.
It's okay, keep writing and doing what you like and you'll get better and better ^~^
Shining_Hotaru_25 #2
Chapter 5: Hmm...this could be quite promising...i mean, the plot is indeed very interesting ^^ (the reason for me reading until here and even commenting) but i do feel that everything is developing too fast and one chapter is gone in a blink of an eye :(
Ways to improve?( 'cause, yes, of course you can~ ;) ) i would suggest, first of all, a greater amount of attention on the details- the descriptions- you tend to overlook them and go almost straight through the action. Here you could insist more on the characters, describe their actions, feelings thoroughly( maybe add in some "surprise"-elements too, why not? Something to get us puzzled for a moment or more), and, finally, using their surroundings/the environment could be a good idea too. It's all about the details and the way you combine them on your paper :) i hope at least a bit of what i said here will come in handy to you..
idk, this is just what i personally felt it was missing from this story :D you can take it or not into consideration ;)
Anyway, i'm quite curious about what's going to happen next and how the next chapter will look like! so good luck with that author-nim! ^_^

[oh my gosh what a long comment!! >_< aish; sorry 'bout that]
Beibydhe #3
Chapter 4: can't wait for more..
mine52 #4
Chapter 4: omo i love the whole plot of the story though its short i felt upset hehe
more 2min feels ohoho
cant wait for the next chapter excited herexD..
authoornim daebak keep it up fighting!.
canarydreams #5
Chapter 4: The pair of shoes is fab! I bet Taemin's y in that dress. Lolz
Beibydhe #6
Chapter 3: poor tae has to give up his life, family and everything..
just hope their plan will turn out well..
can't wait to see how their first encounter will be..
thanks for updating..
update soon authornim ^^
canarydreams #7
Omo OnJongKey are in a relationship. Whatta surprise!
canarydreams #8
So when Taeyeon was murdered it was near the palace?

It was pretty fun that Taemin didn't realize he was speaking with the royals haha so cute.

And about the poster... I'll make something. Just don't expect though. I like your story to continue so I 'll try to make a decent one haha
jellee #9
Chapter 1: This is very interesting. I can't wait to see how Taemin is going to react to being told to act as a girl and then Minho to see Taeyeon again. :P
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