C06 - pinkblink

Graceless Heart Graphic Challenges // R2 Open // R1 Winners Posted
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This entry looks really fantastic.
The cutting/blending is flawless.
You used the font well and the text effects look good.
I like how the "A" is behind the main girl and over the close crop face, it adds a layer of depth.
There is a good mix of stock and textures also.
I like how you direct the focus towards the girl in the middle.
It's very clear where your focus is and you did it in a number of great ways.
The main image is centered, repeated cards on each side, and text on both sides.
The vertical and horiztonal spacing are varied well. All these things help your composition.
I'm trying to think of ways to help you improve and it's a bit hard lol
Try playing with more textures or more stocks to create a more complicated base.
No it's not a necessity but I suggest it, just so you can practice new things and have a wider range of skills :)
Thank you so much for this beautiful entry<3

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June 16 - I'm away on a business trip so that's why I haven't updated with reviews in a bit! It's coming soon though so thank you for your patience

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stephhh-
#1
Chapter 35: I wish you all the bestest of everything possible :D! (wow *feeling bad for only commenting now*)
Good good luck for everything and stay healthy, don't drown!
overseas- #2
Chapter 35: Wish you the best for while you're moving and working full-time! I understand doing so can be hard, so don't exert yourself, and take your time on the reviews and whatnot. They can surely come later. :D
shin-oppa
#3
Challenge #: o6
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/9q5nHQB.png
Review: Yes, please.
newgirl #4
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/VJynEeE.png
Review: Yes pls ^^
FeliciaT
#5
Chapter 2: omg i just know that i win the first round ;; omg thank you so muchhhhh <333
i'm so lateeeeee
pinkblink
#6
Okay I'm so nervous & excited for this because this is my first time making an icon set :o But this was fun though :D

Challenge #: 05
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/7XxP5Am.png
Review: Yes please :D
pinkblink
#7
Chapter 34: Thank you for the review! I'll try to create more complicated bases in the future :D Can't wait to try out the other challenges xD
pinkblink
#8
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/km5jP5N.png
Review: Yes please!
BunniesOnTheMoon
#9
Chapter 33: Thank you for the review bb! It was a big concern for me on negativity and spacing for this. I'll pay attention to that in the future!