C07 - newgirl

Graceless Heart Graphic Challenges // R2 Open // R1 Winners Posted
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Critique

This looks very cool and consistent throughout. 
The textures in the background are nice.
The croppings and placements of the model is good.
The horizontal and vertical spacing is good again.
I think you should work on balance some more. For example, 
you have a big face/eye view andthen a big flower right next to each
other in the center. it's a big focus point and quite "heavy" in the center.
try to break that up a bit and balance the piece some more. 
A good trick I do to check the balance is i circle some major spots.
Thank you for the entry<3

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June 16 - I'm away on a business trip so that's why I haven't updated with reviews in a bit! It's coming soon though so thank you for your patience

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stephhh-
#1
Chapter 35: I wish you all the bestest of everything possible :D! (wow *feeling bad for only commenting now*)
Good good luck for everything and stay healthy, don't drown!
overseas- #2
Chapter 35: Wish you the best for while you're moving and working full-time! I understand doing so can be hard, so don't exert yourself, and take your time on the reviews and whatnot. They can surely come later. :D
shin-oppa
#3
Challenge #: o6
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/9q5nHQB.png
Review: Yes, please.
newgirl #4
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/VJynEeE.png
Review: Yes pls ^^
FeliciaT
#5
Chapter 2: omg i just know that i win the first round ;; omg thank you so muchhhhh <333
i'm so lateeeeee
pinkblink
#6
Okay I'm so nervous & excited for this because this is my first time making an icon set :o But this was fun though :D

Challenge #: 05
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/7XxP5Am.png
Review: Yes please :D
pinkblink
#7
Chapter 34: Thank you for the review! I'll try to create more complicated bases in the future :D Can't wait to try out the other challenges xD
pinkblink
#8
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/km5jP5N.png
Review: Yes please!
BunniesOnTheMoon
#9
Chapter 33: Thank you for the review bb! It was a big concern for me on negativity and spacing for this. I'll pay attention to that in the future!