C06 - BunniesOnTheMoon

Graceless Heart Graphic Challenges // R2 Open // R1 Winners Posted
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Critique

Of course the cutting/blending is perfect so no more needs to be said about that.
You used the font fell and the text effects look good.
There is a wonderful mix of stock and textures also.
I like how you direct the focus towards the girl in the middle.
It's very clear where your focus is and you did it in a number of great ways.
The main image has a clear view compared to the "supporting" ones where the faces
are covered. It is a good way to differentiate them. Other things include that main
image is centered, white background is behind her, the vertical stripes on each side,
the long strip of text, and the repeated clocks. All these things help your composition.
What I think could help is thinking about the vertical spacing. For example,
the signature above is very "top heavy" all the models are at the same eye level. 
It keeps my eyes stuck at the top and doesn't promote movement around the signature.
Thank you so much for this beautiful entry<3

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June 16 - I'm away on a business trip so that's why I haven't updated with reviews in a bit! It's coming soon though so thank you for your patience

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stephhh-
#1
Chapter 35: I wish you all the bestest of everything possible :D! (wow *feeling bad for only commenting now*)
Good good luck for everything and stay healthy, don't drown!
overseas- #2
Chapter 35: Wish you the best for while you're moving and working full-time! I understand doing so can be hard, so don't exert yourself, and take your time on the reviews and whatnot. They can surely come later. :D
shin-oppa
#3
Challenge #: o6
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/9q5nHQB.png
Review: Yes, please.
newgirl #4
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/VJynEeE.png
Review: Yes pls ^^
FeliciaT
#5
Chapter 2: omg i just know that i win the first round ;; omg thank you so muchhhhh <333
i'm so lateeeeee
pinkblink
#6
Okay I'm so nervous & excited for this because this is my first time making an icon set :o But this was fun though :D

Challenge #: 05
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/7XxP5Am.png
Review: Yes please :D
pinkblink
#7
Chapter 34: Thank you for the review! I'll try to create more complicated bases in the future :D Can't wait to try out the other challenges xD
pinkblink
#8
Challenge #: 06
Image URL: http://i.imgur.com/km5jP5N.png
Review: Yes please!
BunniesOnTheMoon
#9
Chapter 33: Thank you for the review bb! It was a big concern for me on negativity and spacing for this. I'll pay attention to that in the future!