C07 - goldenblood
Graceless Heart Graphic Challenges // R2 Open // R1 Winners PostedCritique
This is a very interesting entry! I love monochrome ahah
The composition isn't the strongest that it can be. The focus is good though.
Your eyes are immediately drawn to the center and the big models face.
The main text is clear and legible. All good points.
The use of textures and shapes to frame is very good.
Particularly the circle edges around both ends of the banner,
they help direct and bring in your focus to the center.
Don't be afraid to give your models some more breathing room however.
You could vary the horizontal spacing some more so they aren't glued onto each other
The vertical spacing has a very good variety.
The eye level of the big model, the small model, and the main text
keeps your eyes moving.
The different text effects are a nice touch. Be careful of the quality of the text especially.
Some are hard to read, try to move them some more layers up if the coloring is too strong.
Also, generally try to keep textures/brushes/stocks off model's faces.
Thank you for the lovely entry!
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