Chapter 1: This is nice and creative, though there are a few mistakes. In the first letter, it's been a week since the accident, and in the second letter, it's been five days. Also Junhong and Himchan would be been dead already since the accident since they have broken necks.
Chapter 1: YEOBO!!! I READ YOUR FIC NOW~! SHOOT IT! FROM THE VERY BEGINNING OF THE PARAGRAPH I STARTED TO CRY WITH MY USUAL SAD MUSIC PLAYING UNTIL AT THE LAST PART OF THIS STORY! AND NOW I'M STILL CRYING!! ㅠㅠ
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