Chapter 2: Wow! Great story!
And the ending was dramatic but hopeful. you write it so well, I dodn't need to read your explanation to understand the story. Good job!
Chapter 2: oh my-- wow, just wow. I really really liked this, it's different~
At first I thought that all those moments were like random moments/memories of his life, but when they all were connected to each other in some way I had my suspicions that he might've had multiple personality disorder, especially when Minho appeared in those moments and Taemin didn't remember anything.
I really enjoyed reading this, I really like your writing style~ you wrote the 'Min' moments so beautifully I shivered to each word... I hope he gets better~
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