Curse of Oedipus

Description

When our eyes met for the first time, the connection was immediate. From the very first glance she had changed me for forever. But I couldn't find it in myself to mind.

 

 

Foreword

Hey~

I'm busy as hell but the idea just wouldn't leave me alone so here you go, a little oneshot. The title actually says it all, but if it doesn't ring any bells, don't worry you'll understand in the end :)

However, I feel like I should warn you. I haven't read anything close to this ever before so it definitely isn't a usual storyline. I hope you will be understanding and believe me when I say that it has nothing to do with my own life.

Continue on your own responsibility and prepare to be minded..

 

UPDATE!

I made an improved version of this oneshot, I advise you to read it here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/376048

 

 

Comments

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-alive
#1
Chapter 1: Well, this was interesting. The story was a bit too fast paced, so maybe you could try lengthening the one-shot?
But other than that, it's nice!
Gingko
#2
Chapter 1: Oh God , how bad I felt for Key as I was reading this . Didn't expect the lady to be his birth mother .... and they even made love .

;AAA;
mewmew24
#3
i'm waiting :)
Loverkee #4
fighting!!!
-alive
#5
This seems nice. I'll be waiting!
kimxian #6
nice! Key! <3