~*REVIEW*~

AQUARELLE // SMTOWN'S NEW GIRLGROUP - APPLY CLOSED!
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■ Baek yoori
positions: lead vocalist
face claim: Park sora
love interest: do kyungsoo
applicant: a-yo-jojo
application review

twelvemiracles - heyeyey first applicant!! thank you so much for applying and the very amazing app you made I am amazed *_* The personality, background, love interest are not over-did and I like that. Although about the "being raised by a nanny" and "social butterfly" doesnt exactly makes sense to me. For someone home-schooled, I don't think she could be that socialable, so please do something about it :) Also, I know this is my mistake but please add a position section. Pushing that away though, your app is very nice and i would love to write about Yoori. It is pending for me. 

**Thank you, it is now accepted!


RoyalJune - hello there, roxas. first of all i would like to thank you for being our first applicant ! yay ♡ okay so let's go onto the bussiness, shall we ? first, i agreed with twevlemiracles. being homeschooled but then a social butterfly doesn't really make sense - i hope you can do something about it ? ( thankyou for clearing things up ) but then, personally, i really really like your app. it's neat, and omg that personality and beckground detail i just can't - and i really love how you interact with kyungsoo, like really. ( that boy will always be squishy ) overall, your app is excelent ! thanks for applying ! lots of love, roxas. ♡

 

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■ jung munmin
position: vocalist
face claim: Lee geumhee
love interest: do kyungsoo
applicant: jmm_012
application review

twelvemiracles - okay first, thank you for applying! So reading your app, I was sort of dissapointed. Did you read the cheatsheet? because there are some you left out. First, please delete all hints. Second, a paragraph is not just 1 or 2 sentences. Third, your trivia is not a trivia at all and big eyes are not a style. Forth, you got the pesona wrong. The story plot are also too simple and over-used. I'm sorry for this harsh review, but i suggest you look at other applications. i'm not saying you're allowed to copy, i'm saying you should see how it's done. You also forgot the password and the blog title. If you'd fix those things above, we'll see about it. For now its pending, and for missing two things out, it's two strikes.


RoyalJune - hello, jung mun min. first, i would like to thank you for applying ! okay let's get started. i think twelvemiracles had almost said all the things that should've been said so - my review is not going to be that long c: first, your persona. persona is not a personality. If you don't know what persona is, '' ice princess ' or ' eyesmile queen ' should be the example. i agreed with twelve, your background is too cliche and the fact that you did not delete all the brackets saddens me /sobs. ( sorry for being dramatic ? lmao ) but then, your name is really cute i like it haha. Goodluck on fixing all the things that we've mentioned ! please tell us if you already fix those mistakes c: 

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■ kim jaerin
pOSITION:  lead vocalist, dancer
face claim: JO EUNHEE
love interest: KIM MINSEOK
applicant: LEE_KAIRI
application review

twelvemiracles - Thanks for applying! Personally, I think your app is really good and I don't think there's anything wrong with it. Jongin being her twin is also very cute, I like that. But tbh, i'm kinda confused if she's into singing or dancing. Your app was indicating to singing- but then the audition with dance and Jongin kinda makes her into dancing so.. which one? Please add a position section for that :) Her relationship with minseok is cute and I;d love to write about that. For me, it's accepted but do make it clear about her position and talent :)

RoyalJune - thanks for applying, kai ! i like your app, is neat and detail so thumbs up for you ! and omg, she really does look like kai it'll be fun to write about her /chuckles. maybe that's all from me ? haha thanks for applying once again ! ♡

 

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■ moon younghee
pOSITION:  lead vocalist, rapper
face claim: seul
love interest: KIM jongdae
applicant: sunlightparade
application review

twelvemiracles - thank you so much for applying! okay so, I really like your app. It's neat and easy to read. Her personality is understandable also so 1 point for you. Reading the background, I actually feel bad sobs but it's a good plot and I appreciate that. Although about the talents, she has too much. Viola and guitar, baking, fashion, swimming, reading, rapping, singing, okay I understand the singing part but the others? she sounds a bit like Mary Sue if you see her talents so please edit that a bit :) Anyway, her relationship with Jongda is effing cute and kyuhyun asdfghjkl cute. I guess that's all from me, i love your app but it's still pending for me. *btw answered your questions on your blog post :) **Thank you! it is now accepted for me!

RoyalJune - since twelve had already mentioned all of the things i don't know what to say anymore -- but i like your app. it's neat and well - written. I love Younghee character aswell : ) and omona kim jongdae and omona kyuhyun !1! it'll be fun to write about you hehe, i hope you'll get accepted ! : ) 

Royaljune & Twelve - CONGRATULATIONS! ~*

 

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■ melissa chu
pOSITION:  LEad rapper, dancer
face claim: Jung minhee
love interest: KIM jongdae
applicant: cinemon
application review 

twelvemiracles - thanks for applying! okay lets just go straight to the point, the blog title is wrong and please delete all the hints, I hate seeing them all over again. Also, please add a position section so it'll be clear what you want to be. Your twins however, it gives an image of a perfect character. Hyoyeon and cl? they're both good at what they're doing so please, choose one. But pushing that all away i like your app. The personality is well-rounded and the background is very neat. I also like the ulzzang you choose teehee minhee is pretty /nods. well that's all I guess, it's still pending for me, and for missing 2 things out, 2 strikes. please edit those things out :)

*so far you only edited two things out. Your blog title  is still wrong, and i dont see any position section. + your character is underweight.

**thank you, its accepted for me now.

RoyalJune - heol. twelve is so detailed i -- uhm. first, i agree with twelve i like your ulzzang cries ♡ and uhm it's adorable on how Melissa loves monkey ( because monkeys are cute ) thanks for applying !              

 

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■ Yu Noreun
pOSITION:  lead vocalist, rapper
face claim: jiwon
love interest: luhan
applicant: bubble_hun
application review

twelvemiracles - Thank you so much for applying! So, I couldnt really find anything wrong with your app besides the wrong password. Your personality and background are really well-rounded, and wow she has so many likes lol. Luhan's personality reminds me of the time in exo showtime where they went to the haunted house xD well I think it's really cute, how they interact like normal :) Well my review's not really that long, its 1 strike because of the password ;n; So please fix it, the other things are already good o u o
*Thank you, it is now accepted for me!
 

RoyalJune - omona, thankyou for spending hours and days on making filling the app, i'm touched ; u ; ♡ okay first i really like your app, is very neat and i love neat - ness so plus point from me. and yeah we'll be giving some awkward moments of the girls with exo -- i guess. thanks for applying ! i hope you'll get accepted c: 

 

 

 

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■ ahn jinyul
 
 
pOSITION:  main rapper, dancer
face claim: jang hae byeol
love interest: kim jongdae
applicant: limsoomie
application review

twelvemiracles - thank you for applying! Well straight to the point, her talents- there are too many, please focus on some and make it stand out. And please choose only one persona. For her friends, love rival, rival, why ocs? there are many idols you can use, writing about 8 girls are hard enough and plus more ocs? I dont think i can handle that :c But pushing those away, I like your character's personality and i think she matches really well with Jongdae :) If you could fix those things above, we'll gladly accept it :)
*Thank you! it's now accepted for me!
 

RoyalJune - tufufufu

 

 

 

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■ song jinhee
pOSITION:  main dancer, vocalist
face claim: do hweji
love interest: do kyungsoo
applicant: skywriterv
application review

twelvemiracles - Thanks for aplying! Okay I love your app, I'm loving Jinhee right now. There's so many possible interactions I can make between Jinhee and My character, Mira. I love how the background has a little twist without anything complicated in it c: Her personality is detailed as well. I have nothing againts her love life and nothing seemed to be wrong. Just if you can make her persona a bit more unique? Dncing queen is just too plain i guess lol. Well everything seems to be in its place (what am i saying lol) i still cant help but see many similarities with my character xD I love your app, its accepted for me!

RoyalJune - tufufufu

 

 

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■ kim hyeri
pOSITION:  Lead vocalist, dancer
face claim: pony
love interest: kim minseok
applicant: emiliaaaaaaaa
application review

twelvemiracles - Thank you for applying! Okay so first, Byun Baekhyun is taken for love rival. I like your app, but it lacks something. The personality is a bit messy and rather hard to understand. The background is okay, althoughi prefer having more twists and explanation, maybe about her singing? She's called Primadonna because of a singing role, why not explain more in the background? Also, her persona is still wrong, persona is like "ice princess" and stuff like that. Why is she scared of Minho? is there some sort of event that caused her to be afraid of him? Well her interaction with her love interest is good, but I dont think "Supervisor Sunbae" exists, I want this to be more realistic. Please edit those things above, and for missing the baekhyun part, 1 strike.

RoyalJune - tufufufu

 

 

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■ song hana
pOSITION:  Main dancer , sub- rapper 
face claim: kwon sujeong
love interest: ?
applicant: silverclouds
application review

twelvemiracles - ladidadidu

RoyalJune - hello there minah and thanks for applying ! c: okay, let's go down onto bussiness shall we ? first, i'm sad that you didn't delete all the brackets :c so that's the first strike for you. And also, i don't quite understand her personality to be honest -- and uhm about the love interest it's okay that you wanted us to decide but don't you have someone that you want from a certain group maybe ? or just mention the group name and wala we can choose him for you. so for me is still pending now, and i'm sorry the the code didn't work sobs. i think twelve will post even more longer review but i guess this is from me, goodluck ! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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■ park yenah
pOSITION:  main dancer, rapper
face claim: eun gyeong
love interest: kim jongin
applicant: warrior028
application review

twelvemiracles - ladidadidu

RoyalJune - tufufufu

 

 

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■ Serena moon
pOSITION:  Main rapper, dancer
face claim: han hyeyeon
love interest: kyuhyun
applicant: heedick
application review

twelvemiracles - ladidadidu

RoyalJune - tufufufu

 

 

 

 

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this sounds immature. but i feel like leaving the fandom omg exo.

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skywriterV
#1
Chapter 9: Omg suddenly I saw Jinhee's name and I'm like...wait does this means I'm chosen? Thank youuuuuu so much <3 will be waiting for the updates soon. Congrats to noreun as too !
Gratis
#2
Chapter 9: I-I got picked..?

Omgeeee I'm utterly speechless right now :o

But-

HECK TEAH I GOT PICKED FISHES *^*

Sorry for my randomness ._.

I like the idea of this chapter honestly ;)) I sense a Jinhee and Noreun shipping here <3333


Imma stalk the other members app nao *^*
heebumdae
#3
Chapter 2: so did I even have a chance? u never updated the review page...so was my character rejected before you guys even read it?

I understand if you're busy...but it made me upset seeing you guys already picking members when my character hasnt even been reviewed yet. :/
LimSooMie
#4
Chapter 9: Nice teaser~
Welcome back!
Lee_Kairi
#5
Chapter 9: It's ok~ at least you didn't forget about this~ ^_^

Congrats to noreun & jinhee~ OuO
Nice teaser~ ☆☆
Looking forward for the next updates~ ^_^
Hwaiting~!♡♡
canismajor
#6
Chapter 9: omggg finally an update :'D congrats to noreun and jinhee o/ I'm so excited for the next updates!
cinemon #7
Chapter 8: Congratulations
LimSooMie
#8
Chapter 8: congratulations to Jaerin~~
Gratis
#9
Chapter 8: Congratulations to Jaerin \o/ I stalked her app and it was really good.

(Sorry)