Her p.o.v:
after a few moment of silence im thanking him and making the biggest mistake of my life..
im so stupid, so so stupid!! i should'nt have kissed him..
Chapter 1: Hi. Thought I'd give this a try.
This is something new since there aren't names for the characters.
I'd say this can be real sweet, but it's quite difficult to read and quite confusing due to the lack of spacing, no upper case, and no separation between the story and comments.
You have a nice storyline there. It'll help with more spacing.
Good luck in writing. =)
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