silence

Description

one shot about the one you love the most and the way he dont really get how much he's important to you and how much influance he have on youre life..

Foreword

hii ^^ this story is the first one im posting online i hope you would like it.. im sorry for any mistakes that i will have (for sure :p) english its not really my first language so.. you know.. anyway i hope you would like my story and plz subscribe and comment even if you didnt like it and ill try to make some changes and make it better~lova ya ♥ b.t.w my charecters dont have names so if you have any Suggestions plz share them with me
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rurida #1
Chapter 1: Hi. Thought I'd give this a try.
This is something new since there aren't names for the characters.
I'd say this can be real sweet, but it's quite difficult to read and quite confusing due to the lack of spacing, no upper case, and no separation between the story and comments.
You have a nice storyline there. It'll help with more spacing.
Good luck in writing. =)
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