Chapter 1: Despite the fact that it's late and I totally missed the obvious and that it's a 'you' story (which I typically don't read on principle), this was... entertaining. I found it through The Library Recommendation shop so yeah... I know I would have liked it more as 3rd (or even 1st) person but this definitely had some funny moments in it and my opinion isn't really important on that point because it's your story, so go you! lol
The "I'm yours" comment was very much hilarious and also Youngjae's "Peasant" remark. Both had me laughing. And it was strangely endearing that Junhong was messing with her by the end. haha Likewise, the song name and album title made sense, even if they certainly were memorable. For sure. So yes. The comedic moments were definitely there. You did have a couple typos throughout but nothing major that got in the way of understanding or anything like that.
So good job overall and well done with the comedy. ;)
Chapter 1: And I feel like jumping off a cliff after reading this! MY HEART TICKLES OH NO I JUST OKAY I WANT ZELO TO BE MY PIZZA DELIVERY GUY PLEASEE! xD
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