Cheesy Attention

Description

 

A guy cautious about love and a girl crazy about love. And that lends to a....

Foreword

 

A romantic comedy
 
Park Rinrin is a noisy loving, caring lover of Onew and he is a kind, friendly, smart, calm student. 
 
A guy cautious about love and a girl crazy about love. 
 
Everyday Rinrin would jump and declare her love to him for all to hear, saying cheesy lines everytime they meet. Onew remains friendly and takes Rinrin's love as a puppy childish feeling. Ignoring her feelings he later on sees her as a friend. 
 
What will happen when something unexpected happens to Rinrin? 
 
Onew felt rather uncomforable with Rinrin missing. Something strange was going on and it just bugs him. 
 
No Chessy lines
No begging to love her back
No bubbly seatmate
No friend
And no Park Rinrin. 
 
Disappearance makes you realize.....
 
Story & Plot by: chicken_oppa
Writer: KMLZee
Two-shot requested from: Digital remix 
Poster by: KMLZee / new poster was created Dec 22, 2013/
Original Poster:
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(KMLZee)
I hope you like this two shot (When I get started) ^__^ I don't actually know how to write a two-shot. Hahaha but I think it's like a one-shot with more chapters. So, I think 1-4 chapters. Depending how the story goes. 
 
Please make Digital remix your number one request shop. ^_^b 
For those that don't know please request!

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Aloner
#1
Thanks for sharing.
chicken_oppa
#2
aye!!! you didn't update it anymore...
chicken_oppa
#3
aaahhhh! *coughs* ahhh!!!! That ridiculous poultry bird! How could it? *screams* It took away Onew from her and that's because of chicken!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, by the way, I'm very sorry for not commenting after you published the 3rd chapter, I'm sorry to upset you my dear author... forgive me??? onegai! onegai! onegai! I'm soooooooo busy about research, presentation, exams and bunch of bunch of projects that rarely check my subscripted fics when I'm online. I'm wondering also why you didn't update these week, are you busy too? or you're waiting for my reply? LOL. On to the story, I think it's very cute of Onew to miss her, he kept cherishing the moment that Rinrin was still there. Oh~ My face was growing hot while reading your update... hehehe. I really enjoyed it! Thank you. And- and- and- "A day that’s no longer considered Valentine’s Day but Sorry Day" LMAO~~~ You made that up? Really cute~~~~ yay!!!!! I'm going down the hill because of this................................................. update soon *gives u virtual munchkin for being such a nice nice too nice author* and * gives u cheese stick for making 'cheesy attention'* Have a nice day. ^^
chicken_oppa
#4
Annyeong chingu! Thanks for updating. By the way, how many chapter will this story be? I hope it will be long... Everytime I went online here in AFF, I always wish that you will update because I'm so eager to read what's going to happen next!!! *screams* I really like it that Onew has no feelings for her because I'm sick that everytime I'm reading fics, the guy immediately fall with the girl at the first time seeing her, it's so common. I want something new and you made it! Thank you!!! LOL. I kept laughing because Rinrin is so silly and Onew... peeeeeessssh! There's also some wrong grammars and spelling but it's okay, I don't mind at all, the important thing is you work hard for it and with that, two thumbs up for you my dear author! Have a nice day^^
chicken_oppa
#5
LOL. I will read this as soon as I get home. Thanks for updating! ^^ *laughs evilly*
creatingfaith #6
ONEW! ^^<br />
keep up the great work! :D
chicken_oppa
#7
*clears throat* Thank you for updating this fic...................... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I can't help but laugh!!! It's really funny and that's the way I want the characters to act. When I'm reading your update I kept hyperventilating, Rinrin is so crazy to him yet Onew remained friendly despite the fact that a wild girl is in love with him. LOL. *gives u virtual munchkins* I wanted to crawl when Rinrin yelled infront of the class, declaring her love for him and saying cheeeesssssssy lines. LOL. She's above normal and I like it. Thank you again my dear author! I'll wait for the next update and prepare myself to laugh very hard again. Kya~~~<br />
chicken_oppa
#8
At first I was being paranoid when you didn't update immediately but of course, we have lives outside AFF, that's understandable. And school, *sighs* it kept stopping us from writing fics. Sorry for the late reply, I still have my exams and I've banned myself from getting near the laptop. And for the cheesy lines, *laughs* why don't you search some in the internet? I think there's millions of that. Wait, I nearly forgot about the poster... I'm flattered that despite your busy schedule you spent some time making it so thank you. It's really cute, *laughs* *saves it in my computer* Have a nice day~~~!
chicken_oppa
#9
Oh, I see... I'm still waiting... I hope you're going to start it as soon as you can... hehe
KMLZee
#10
@chicken_oppa<br />
There going to pop up some where in the story. hahha<br />
Oh, and sorry for not starting. I'm kind of busy right now to update. BUT I will update sooon.<br />
I hope. -.-