And that's that!

Cheesy Attention

 

And that’s that!
Class started more than 30 minutes ago. The teacher went on and on about whatever happened when he was younger. Since he’s so old now. The guy just can’t be quiet. Half of the class was deeply listening to every word. There was still the other half that wasn’t listening or didn’t have a care. 
 
“Oppa, want to go on a date today?” The girl asked. Her eyes fluttered with her smile going sweeter. Soon she looked like a cute little doll. Onew just looked at the girl. He was the other half listening and Rinrin was with the other half that wasn’t listening. 
 
He wanted to listen to his oh-so-boring teacher. Onew just blinked a few times before trying to rethink his answer. He didn’t want to sound rude or mean in any way. It was just not him. If Onew was mean in anyway or form wouldn’t that not be Onew.
 
“Rinrin, we should listen to the teacher.” Onew responded with friendly eyes. Onew turned back toward the board looking with curious eyes. Rinrin couldn’t help but melt. He’s just so dreamy. Rinrin thought while looking at the board as well. From time to time she would catch glances at him. Onew would notice and try his best to smile. To be honest he thought it was a bit awkward. 
 
Why does she give me those lovey puppy eyes? Onew thought trying to listen to the teacher. Onew couldn’t help but tense up with Rinrin right there. Looking at him with those eyes. 
 
“How about a date with me?” Taemin lead toward Rinrin with a childish smile. Taemin was on her right with Key. To her left was Onew. Every time Onew would come to mind Rinrin would feel shivers. If she didn’t feel shivers her heart would go at a fast. Sometimes she would catch herself blushing like crazy because of him.
 
Rinrin almost didn’t hear what Taemin said. She only wished Onew could say those words to her instead of Taemin. Thinking about Onew like crazy. Her cheeks started to go a red colour. She felt like there was a sudden burst of hot air that went to her face. 
 
“Onew-” Was all Rinrin could say. When she said his name her tone of voice went into a dreamy state. It was Onew’s name was something very dreamy. Well of course for Rinrin. Onew was just amazing. 
 
She was of course his lover. Not like holding hands, kissing kind of lover. It was just that she was so in love with him that she considers herself his lover. After all he would soon love her back. Rinrin just has to try even harder to get her love across to him. No matter how long it might take. No matter how hard it might be. Onew would soon love her back. 
 
“Onew, I love you! You are the moon and I’m the stars. We fit perfectly like a puzzle. Don’t you think!?” Rinrin yelled in front of the whole class. Every student stared and the teacher. Rinrin didn’t care. It was for Onew and she didn’t care if anyone heard. She didn’t care if the whole world hear her love shout out. Actually she wanted everyone on the earth to hear. Everyone in the universe to hear her out. 
 
“Rinrin!” Onew yelled feeling embarrassed. 
 
(KMLZee)
Hello! Finally here is the first chapter. I’m sorry again that it’s late and that’s it’s small. TT^TT I’m kind of lost at cheesy lines and yeah. Can you tell me at least 10+ cheesy lines. It would help me so much!!~ And I notice I spelled Cheesy wrong on the poster. Damn…..UGH! 
 
The next chapter will be longer than this one. That’s for sure. I will try to get the 2nd chapter up later. I have to get ready for tomorrow. SCHOOL TOMORROW! D: *cries* Summer went by so fast. I don’t like school TT^TT
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Aloner
#1
Thanks for sharing.
chicken_oppa
#2
aye!!! you didn't update it anymore...
chicken_oppa
#3
aaahhhh! *coughs* ahhh!!!! That ridiculous poultry bird! How could it? *screams* It took away Onew from her and that's because of chicken!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, by the way, I'm very sorry for not commenting after you published the 3rd chapter, I'm sorry to upset you my dear author... forgive me??? onegai! onegai! onegai! I'm soooooooo busy about research, presentation, exams and bunch of bunch of projects that rarely check my subscripted fics when I'm online. I'm wondering also why you didn't update these week, are you busy too? or you're waiting for my reply? LOL. On to the story, I think it's very cute of Onew to miss her, he kept cherishing the moment that Rinrin was still there. Oh~ My face was growing hot while reading your update... hehehe. I really enjoyed it! Thank you. And- and- and- "A day that’s no longer considered Valentine’s Day but Sorry Day" LMAO~~~ You made that up? Really cute~~~~ yay!!!!! I'm going down the hill because of this................................................. update soon *gives u virtual munchkin for being such a nice nice too nice author* and * gives u cheese stick for making 'cheesy attention'* Have a nice day. ^^
chicken_oppa
#4
Annyeong chingu! Thanks for updating. By the way, how many chapter will this story be? I hope it will be long... Everytime I went online here in AFF, I always wish that you will update because I'm so eager to read what's going to happen next!!! *screams* I really like it that Onew has no feelings for her because I'm sick that everytime I'm reading fics, the guy immediately fall with the girl at the first time seeing her, it's so common. I want something new and you made it! Thank you!!! LOL. I kept laughing because Rinrin is so silly and Onew... peeeeeessssh! There's also some wrong grammars and spelling but it's okay, I don't mind at all, the important thing is you work hard for it and with that, two thumbs up for you my dear author! Have a nice day^^
chicken_oppa
#5
LOL. I will read this as soon as I get home. Thanks for updating! ^^ *laughs evilly*
creatingfaith #6
ONEW! ^^<br />
keep up the great work! :D
chicken_oppa
#7
*clears throat* Thank you for updating this fic...................... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I can't help but laugh!!! It's really funny and that's the way I want the characters to act. When I'm reading your update I kept hyperventilating, Rinrin is so crazy to him yet Onew remained friendly despite the fact that a wild girl is in love with him. LOL. *gives u virtual munchkins* I wanted to crawl when Rinrin yelled infront of the class, declaring her love for him and saying cheeeesssssssy lines. LOL. She's above normal and I like it. Thank you again my dear author! I'll wait for the next update and prepare myself to laugh very hard again. Kya~~~<br />
chicken_oppa
#8
At first I was being paranoid when you didn't update immediately but of course, we have lives outside AFF, that's understandable. And school, *sighs* it kept stopping us from writing fics. Sorry for the late reply, I still have my exams and I've banned myself from getting near the laptop. And for the cheesy lines, *laughs* why don't you search some in the internet? I think there's millions of that. Wait, I nearly forgot about the poster... I'm flattered that despite your busy schedule you spent some time making it so thank you. It's really cute, *laughs* *saves it in my computer* Have a nice day~~~!
chicken_oppa
#9
Oh, I see... I'm still waiting... I hope you're going to start it as soon as you can... hehe
KMLZee
#10
@chicken_oppa<br />
There going to pop up some where in the story. hahha<br />
Oh, and sorry for not starting. I'm kind of busy right now to update. BUT I will update sooon.<br />
I hope. -.-