Mama

Description

When the skies and the grounds were one of Legends', through their Divine Forces, nurtured the Tree of Life. An eye of red force created the Evil, which covered the heart of the Tree of Life, and the heart slowly grew dry. To attempt to keep alive the heart of the Tree of Life, the Legends hereby divided the Tree in half and hid each side, hence times is overturned and space turns obscure. The Divine Forces divided into two and created two suns that look alike into two worlds that seem alike. The Legends traveled apart. The Legends shall now see the same sky but shall stand on different grounds. They shall stand on the same ground but shall see different skies. The day the grounds be kept a single file before one sky in two words that seem alike, the legends will meet each other. The day the Red Forces purify and the Divine Forces will reunite into one perfect root…
 
A new world shall open up.

Foreword

Basically a fanfic about EXO's debut song, "Mama". :3

In the country of South Korea, technology advancements lent from Japan, China, and Russia have caused the citizens and residents of Seoul, Busan, and Gangnam to become neglectful towards others. Their god, Mama, has disappeared, leaving her full sons that go by the name EXO-K in charge. Meanwhile, her husband's sons, EXO-M, are to be kept hidden. Mama's husband was infected by the Red Forces, and murdered her. Afraid her sons will fight together, she divided them on her deathbed. When the Red Forces purify, only then will everything live in peace.

How will Mama's 6 sons battle and protect their half brothers from the Red Forces in this dystopian society?

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OH MY GOODNESS. I BARELY SAW ALL THE VIEWS AND STUFF. IM SOOOO SORRY FOR NEVER UPDATING ;-; So much tests... Such little time..

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polarsky #1
Chapter 2: I acrossed your story when i look for some good stories in dystopian tag. Your idea is quite unique here. Mama and papa? That's rare. And this story is about brotherhood not , seriously i hate those story.

I have a suggestion for you author-nim, about the way sehun adressed his older brothers. I know that you want sehun to speak politely. But just drop-off the word -ssi. Koreans dont adress their siblings like that. I suggest you to use "hyung" instead. Its much better to read. And please, dont make sehun call tao as "huang zi", it just doesnt feel right, maybe instead of it you can use "zi tao", much better.

And once more; in the first chapter, you wrote so long; but in the next chapter, you suddenly stop it when tao fix sehun. You can't leave me hanging, author-nim. And please, dont do that again (please make a less length-difference between each chapter, not a huge one). Thank you. And i'm sorry if i hurt your feelings T-T I only say what i need to say