The Best Years

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I never know what to write here.

Foreword

Unlike my infinitely talented sister Squishy, I am not going to even attempt to describe the main characters in my story because I know that at one point, I'll contradict myself. It's easier to save my now. ^^

Originially, I intended for this to be a short oneshot of roughly 2000 words, but I had the urge to flesh it out, and the rest is history (see what I did there). I had the ending all planned out, so now I'm really not sure where this is going to go or if it'll end. I'll signal where I had the original ending when I get there.

Bear with me as I navigate the awful time of college applications, visits, financial aid, scholarships, exams, studying, and life.

ChanRia for life <3

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Started writing: 140103

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Troriael #1
Chapter 5: I am commenting on mobile and IDEK HOW ILL DO THIS BUT OK HERE WE GO. AFF needs an app I'm not kidding...

THE PART WHERE EVERYONE AWS AT OMG I would probably be in the back with a creepy smile and going "aw. YISS. that's what I'm talkin bout" and PSHHHT WHAT ARE YOU SAYING I would NEVER push you or anyone ha ha ha ha,,...... (No I will I definitely will for KAILY)

Girl. I am falling into Chanyeol so much I'm surprised he's not dead or has 6000 broken bones by now. I AM TICKLISH in the waist area if he touched me there I would die

HHAHAAsorry kris some things just aren't meant to be. And one of those things is Kris being cool.

The announcing the field trip part always gets me it makes me SO EXCITED irl for no reason at ALL BC it's FICTION. If it were real I would be so happy that I actually might...clap for joy? /thinks about it/
Yeah no you're right I don't think I ever will clap out of happiness. Unless of course, "if you're happy and you know it clap your hands."

HOTEL
U KNOW WHAT HOTEL MEANS
THERES ONLY ONE THING U THINK OF WHEN YOU THINK OF HOTEL....
FREE BREAKFAST
Just kidding
It's
(Ok I'm done I'm sorry)

Lils I feel like our two stories could be mashed up ALMOSTBC in mine Kai also gets jealous of Luhan. A lot. Later on. You'll see. (MUST UPDATE STORY sOON....)
I like the groups situation btw
And I like that were at an amusement park
There's only one ride for lily to ride that she'll enjoy
(That's right it's Kai IM STOPPING HERE today is just a erted day for me or sm I'm on a roll being obscene)

I WILL DEFEND LUHAN's MANLINESS TO THE GRAVE.
(Lily+aegyo=acceptable. If it were anyone else I'd be gagging and getting goosebumps Eveeeerywherrere. /shudders/
Why is it ok with u tho I don't understand.)

DEAR FICTIONAL CHANYEOL PLEASE DONT DO THINGS NEAR FICTIONAL GLORIA's EAR BC I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT FICTIONAL GLORIA IS VERY TICKLISH THERE TOO AND ITS NOT JUST THE ITCHY KIND OF TICKLISH
(Tbh tho Places I'm ticklish: everywhere)

AFF won't let me
sushi-mushi #2
Chapter 5: I should be doing AP World hw (procrastination) but I ended up reading this instead and AWWWWWWWW
gloria already wrote you an essay, so i won't (i wouldn't either way, because don't know how) but anywho)
AWWWWWWW
VERY CUTE
CLUMSY KLUTZY LILY
MANLY LULU
Troriael #3
Chapter 4: HELLO GLORIA MAKES AN APPEARANCE IN AFF COMMENTS AT LAST
heh

OK THE PART IN ITALICS was basically a (MUCH MUCH MUCH CUTER) description of how i felt yesterday when you were talking about SOMETHING on snapchat. you gave me freaking 3 seconds. and i even wasted 2 of those seconds bc i was panicking while looking at the countdown timer thing.
and then i took a useless screenshot UGH.

"I like you"
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
nO

"Death by feels" sounds so punk-rock (notreallynoitdoesnt)

"she was lost in my eyes" my insides laugh when i see this. u know that feeling like just purely smiling isn't enough and you can't laugh out loud so your heart is like "ha ha ha" I AT DESCRIBING THINGS SAVE ME

my uh
my aim isnt that bad foo

imagine a food fight with exo. it'd be them going insaaaane and kaily just kind of in the background like "ok we're not yeah we're not getting in this" and beagle line being the stars of the show
kris would be like "food fights are not my style" and then something hits him and he turns out to be the best food-launcher to ever be on this earth. of course maknaes (excluding kai) would think it'd be super fun and maybe at the end everyone will just target suho who's trying to stop everything.
yixing would be probably SLEEPING OR SOMETHING through the mess and gets hit and looks up with that cONFUSED FACE like "wha--" and tbh what would luhan and xiumin even be doing??
i know i'd be on the side like "y'all there are kids starvin in africa and also i'm starving here sTOP WASTING FOOD" but be laughing like crazy and somehow get shoved into the mess (JUST LIKE EVERY SINGLE TIME ANYWAY. I ALWAYS GET IN TROUBLE. WHENEVER HERE'S TROUBLE AT SCHOOL YOU'LL FIND ME AT THE SCENE IT'S NOT FAIR.)
whoa i went a little crazy there sorrryyy~

WHY IS CHANYEOL SO FREAKING SMOOTH BUT CHEESY
(fictional) chanyeol dont do this to me

LUHAN=SUGGESTIVE? I NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT THAT BUT UH

(/sends kai to get u back to the table dont leave me alone with these dorks!)

socute
sushi-mushi #4
Chapter 4: Laughter// you've got your kaily romance all figured out havnt you ^^
Cute cute cute
sushi-mushi #5
Chapter 1: laughter// so cute author nim ;)
i was eating cake (it was a dorm birthday today) while reading the first part, so instead of reading the a/n, all i read was, "a needy moan" lol
so so so cuteeeee
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