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They began as nothing.

The became friends - best friends.

They evolved into something else - something more. Their bond became almost unbreakable - almost.

Bonds and promises broke, and they were in no state to be mended.

 

"Promises are just said agreements that can be broken anytime."

"You were never here, so don't act like you'll ever be."

"My feelings for her never changed."

"Well then you have a ing beautiful way of showing it."

"I love you."

 

Foreword

This story is for kfanfiction's first annual writing competition.

This is probably the longest oneshot I've ever written in my life...but I didn't know where exactly to separate it into chapters...so...yeah.

Thanks for reading!

A HUGE thank you to everyone who read, liked, upvoted, subscribed, commented, and everything in between! <3

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LuAnne0420
#1
Chapter 2: where are you Luhan?
I need you. T.T i can't. this story is too painful for me. i'm rolling in my bed crying. this is just so beautifully written.
saranghae-hyuk #2
Chapter 1: I CRIED!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!
Mochi_Cream_Smile
#3
Chapter 2: This is one of the BEST AND MOST WONDERFUL AND BEAUTIFUL STORY I HAVE EVER, AND I MEAN EVER, READ. I love your way of writing and how you were able to make me cry and smile. You, my dear authornim, is very Excellent. Thank you for typing this wonderful story. :)
-Mochi_Cream_Smile <3
flutterwind #4
Chapter 1: So beautiful. I love this story. Sad but amazingly beautiful. Thanks for sharing this story of yours girl. Gonna upvote asap!
Kuro_no_Daisy #5
Chapter 1: I was counting with a sad, heartbreaking end... And then this happends... Gull, I can't explain whatta feel... I wanted to cry, and then I was grinning like a idiot... And then I wanted to cry again because I will never have something like this in real life... But it's way to beautiful and I forgot that thought. But why can't things like this happend in real life? T.T Where can I buy a Luhan for meeeeeeeeeeeeee??? I desperately need one


I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
lostandconfused
#6
Chapter 1: omg ! I can't! <///3 It broke my heart and I loved it at the same time. I mean, there's no 'over-ness' (sorry, can't think of any word) in the story and it was portrayed beautifully that I just had to have all emotions that can be felt at the same time. T.T idk if you can understand me, but I like how you wrote your plot! I mean, yes it is quite cliche but the way you delivered it made the difference! I SWEAR! I really like your writing style~~~ ^^ congratulations, author-nim. You gave justice to my 3-year residency here in AFF. haha. i was actually about to delete this account if I won't be able to find any good thing to read, but Hey! you stopped me. anyway ! :))) congraaaaaats~~~ I LOVE IT !
HallyuFairy #7
Chapter 1: gosh, i was so nervous i thought it will be total heart breaking ending but still, i crid a lot haha.. beautiful work you got here, author! :)
liiaegyoism
#8
Chapter 1: this is so beautiful, ugh, some parts kept on tugging at my heart strings, gosh TT TT <3 <3 <3
deer_love
#9
Chapter 1: ugly tears :( it was so simple and beautiful T____T
Deaniratfn #10
Chapter 1: I cried ohmagod. this is so beautiful :"))♡