The Next Time

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There's always a next time...

to love, to hurt and to forgive.

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

After almost 10 years together one could say that Youngjae and Daehyun knew everything about one another. Even the smallest details, the ones they didn’t consciously pay attention to but knew anyway.

 

Maybe they knew each other too well, 10 years was a long time. And they were young back then, innocent and happy.

 

They were happy now, of course they were. Youngjae loved Daehyun, he loved him so much he could practically feel it pulsate behind the thick bones of his chest.

 

But sometimes, he couldn’t help but think it was love that led him to squint for happiness so far-fetched. The more he loved, the more his expectations seemed to grow.

 

And the harder it became to keep the hollow him from the surface.

 

He had lost count of the times he thought about it,

 

10 years was just long enough to start thinking if it would last forever…

 

enough to take someone for granted.

 

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Hi

Out of the blue I started to work on something new. 

It's not much but I hope you will enjoy reading it ^^

 

<3

Ivy

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soy_latte #1
Chapter 1: This fic is quite old now and you might not read comments anymore but I thought I had to comment still.
It was great, like all your works, I mean, you do put words on humans' feelings. Your fics are always very "human" and full of emotions I absolutely love them.
And this piece is great because it depicts well relationships that have went for a while. How we switch from burning love to sweet affection... And thé note about your parents made it even more understandable. You probably catch well people's lives and emotions irl, and that's probably one of the reasons why you are a good author.
I selfishly would love you to write again but actually I just want you to know that your stories warm my heart :)
YukariStarzYjae #2
Chapter 1: Amazing stories..n i dun know which text are grey..haha..all seem pretty same to me..maybe my phone..all black text..haha..oh well..thank u for sharing wonderful stories authornim..
PuppyNini88 #3
Chapter 1: Asdfghjklzxcvvbnm....
If i'm in Youngjae's position, i'll just leave Dae. 10 years and Dae just don't understand how about Jae's mind wtf.
It's really good story wow....
alienkoala #4
Chapter 1: oh my gosh! you edited it!! idk what prompted me to read this again but when i saw that it was last updated april 22 2016 i kind of squealed omg!! somehow ive memorized this fic already so i could tell which parts were edited lol. and i still love it! and i still cried;;;;:
are you back for more fics authornim?? pls say yes ::) i love your writing so much ❤️
lulukkaebhyun #5
Chapter 1: If im in youngjae shoes . I will make daehyun suffer first . Kick his . Then i forgive him .
alienkoala #6
Chapter 1: i suddenly missed this story so i didnt fight the urge to read it again (like for the 6th time already??)... and i still cry.. gosh bawling my eyes out at 1am;;;;;
i love this story so much.. and i wish you continue the last time too❤️
DefsAmberBiased16 #7
This was an amazing story. I cried my heart out, thank you for writing such a wonderfully emotional piece!
BitsAndPieces #8
Chapter 1: Wow, I'm kind of glad this was only a one shot cause the pressure and heartbroken feelings would have overwhelmed me. I totally felt that pressure on my chest that Sempiternalis was talking about, especially when Youngjae saw Daehyun avoiding his call and leaving with Youngguk. I read that part twice to make sure I understood it well, it was too sad :(
I was so ing frustrated, I mean the situation was so hard on Youngjae, but he couldn't blame it on Daehyun at first, he wasn't a bad man, but I still wonder if he and Youngguk were a thing. I don't understand how Youngjae could restrain himself and not follow them.
The way you ended it was a really plausible situation, there are a lot of people who give in when their partner apologizes even though the situation is really ty and it hurts them a lot. Although I don't agree, cause Daehyun would probably would go back to ignore Youngjae after a while.
I was listening to Ace from Taemin while reading, the verse "I want to be your only ace" fit Youngjae's thoughts very well.

Congrats on writing this, it was really so good!
janeeyre #9
Chapter 1: your stories were really good. gosh jae is such an angel.

I have the same situation with my parents too. More than 20 years of marriage and my dad still have that 'look' when he's with mom.
Love is really the closest thing to magic :)
inixaw #10
Chapter 1: my heart hurts so much because daehyun being an to the angel jae, i nearly cried
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