We Fly, We Fall

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Hi! This is my very first ff here. and because my confidence isn't enough, so i write the ff in bahasa. hope you enjoy the story, and don't forget to subscribe, comments, and support for me! ^^

Foreword

“mwo? Pramugari? Andwe! Kamu harus menjadi pengacara!” ayah meneriaki aku ketika aku mengutarakan keinginanku.

“Ahran-ah.. kau sudah besar sekarang..” dia tersenyum.

“mwo? Memaafkanmu? Molla.. mungkin selamanya aku tak bisa memaafkan mu.” Jawabku masih sambil terisak.

“aigoo.. kalian benar-benar tidak punya malu..” Xiumin gege lewat sambil menggelengkan kepalanya. 

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hi_im_olaf #1
Fighting!!!! keep writing
Yheryong #2
Chapter 1: I'm not an Indonesian, but I'm giving an advice, that you should do a capitalization. And some of the punctuation went wrong. But that's fine :D I'm learning Bahasa anyway. So, the main character would be the girl, Kai and Tao, right? ^^ Tao's character is rare, both the way :D And Baek Hyun's character is kind of a '' here ._.
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