Broken

The Locket Heart

" It's all my fault . " Taemin cry at Minho chest griping at his shirt tightly feeling guilty towards what happen with his friend while Minho try to soothe him. 

 

" Ssh , Taemin it not your fault . It's only an accident . Stop crying, i'm sure he alright and the doctor will come to us and telling us that Key just sleeping . " Onew caress Taemin hair lightly trying to calm down the poor maknae . 

 

" He already in there for 30 minutes . Hyung .. i.. " Jonghyun suddenly broke into tears after he had been silent since they arrive . 

 

" Guys , Key is a strong person . Let's just pray that he would be fine and back to normal scolding us with his sassy mouth . " Onew look at his fellow members they all look pathectic . It not like he not worried about Key but he just doesn't want to see his fellow members lost their hope towards Key . 

 

" Mr Lee . " A doctor came out from the operation room after the red light turn off and come towards Onew . 

 

" How is he ? Is he fine ? Can we meet him? " Jonghyun ask . 

 

" Please calm down sir . I don't know whether it going to be good news or bad news for you . We manage to save your friend but.. " 

 

" But what he lost his memories ? " Minho start to become anxious . 

 

" No, he in coma right now and his percentage to live only 50/50 . " All the SHINee members seem shock with the news that they heard . Jonghyun fell on the floor looking disbelieve same as Taemin . It start to become quite around their world  . Feel like the time has stop ticking and moving . They all feel like getting hit by rock on their head . 

 

" Kibum.... " Jonghyun cried broke the others member as well . 

 

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" Kibum wake up this is Halmoni . " The old woman hold her grandchild hand feeling the cold hand under her warm cozy hand . 

 

" Wake up Bummie Umma miss you . " The woman caresses her son hair while crying looking at her pale looking son on the bed unmoving but his heartbeat still beating . 

 

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Kim Kibum wake up ......  

 

" Where am i . " Key open his eyes slowly after he heard someone call his name . He look around and he only found that there's nothing but white panorama . 

 

Have you ever think about DEATH ? 

 

He heard that voice again asking him question .

 

" Am i died right now ? "  

 

Would you like to see the world without you ? 

 

" world without me ? I don't think i want to see it . They will be better without me . " 

 

If god give you chance to see your life in soul form would you accept it ? 

 

" God give me chance ? I...I accept it . " 

 

 

 

 

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VIPstar #1
Chapter 5: God i love it so much . Too many emotion . Nice
Ilonahaku #2
Hello, how are you? Is everything fine? Did you enjoy your spring holidays? :]
Just wanted to drop and say hi. XD
I am looking forward to the next chapter, but take your time for continuing this story. I will be patiently waiting. :]

Have a great weekend! :]
Ilonahaku #3
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
It is heartbreaking for me to see worried, scared Shinee members. Btw is he Key seriously injured all over his body or just his head got harmed?

I really like the inserted part, where Key´s mom and grandmother visited him.

Wow, the last part of this chapter was mindblowing!!! I am really curious what will happen in next chapter. :D When Key accepted the offer, he will experience following events in his soul form, but after his experience ends, can he come back to his body or come back in time? I mean...is he dead and cant come back alive anymore, because he accepted the offer?

I really like this story a lot, I love how you tell the story, how the whole situation has been developing, how Key has to face all problems, how you incorporated supernatural element in the story. You are doing great job with this story!!! I enjoyed reading all 3 chapters a lot! <3
I am looking forward to the next chapter. :D
Btw how long do you plan to make this fanfic?
Ilonahaku #4
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG, Key has had the same dream for 2 weeks? O.o That is really awful. No wonder that he is even more exhausted and that Onew thought that Key would collapse soon. It also isnt good that he had headache because of lack of sleep. T.T I was worried that he could develop some anxiety attacks. Lack of sleep must also have bad impact on his emotions and he has more time to think about all things. :|
I was surprised how well Key lied to them, it was really smart to make them think that Key has nightmare about his dog. Haha, I really liked Onews joke that Jjong is actually the only dog that can escape from their home. XD

It is so sad to see Key determined to end his life. T.T But I understand that he has to face great emotional pressure and stress, especially when he has the same dream for 2 weeks and there are still bad rumours about him.

Wow, you made a great twist in the story by making the background part of the stage fall on Key! I didnt expect it at all! XDD But I really like this turn of events a lot! Key wanted to die, but if he is in coma, there are many things that can happen meanwhile. I mean that Key can take rest from reality, he can be in his own special world. And it is much better than to commit suicide.
Ilonahaku #5
Chapter 1: I am glad that members are wiling to help him and still care about him. :)
I am so glad that Taemin comforted him, when he started to cry and that Onew carried him to his bed. But it is sad that Key is losing weight and cant sleep properly at all. :/ He is stressed, depressed all the time...what a sorrowful time.

His nightmare is horrible! I am glad that fansigns are actually different in reality, that people cant choose who they want autograph from. I wonder, if that evil girl represents someone who Key knows in reality. The girl´s words are so harsh and it is painful to see that Shinee members in his dream also want him to die. T.T Poor Key. Everybody would break down, if he had dreams, where people want him to be dead. T.T

I am curious why newspapers publish so many rumours about Key that are not true? Do people hate it so much because of his drug+car accident?
Ilonahaku #6
Chapter 1: The summary immediately caught my attention as something that promises really interesting angst fanfic that I might like a lot. But I also wasnt sure what should I really expect, so I was surprised that Key got such problems with his career. I think I have never read a fanfic, where Keys idol position would be in danger because of driving drunk and having drugs that are not his own, I must say that it is really refreshing. :]

I am glad that Key didnt faint, when he had a meeting with SM boss. :) It must be very delicate and uncomfortable situation for both of them, but it cant be helped. I was really surprised by Keys outburst, when he begged SM boss to save his career, but the moment when SM boss told him that he believes him and tried to comfort him, I was surprised again. XD I mean, I didnt think Key would be so desparete to save his idol job and I didnt expect Lee Soman to have understanding and such concern about Key.

Btw, I have a few questions.
1) Was Key really drunk or did he have alcohol traces in his blood? I ask, because I didnt understand how he could get drunk, if he drank from Mir´s glass. If he drank a lot, I would understand it, but if he sipped from Mir´s glass, he shouldnt be drunk a lot.
Somehow I miss the cause why Key was caught driving drunk.
2) And didnt Key realize that he was drunk? So could you explain it to me, please? :)

My next question is about the drug.
3)Does Key know how the drug got into his car or who is the true owner of the drug?
I think if such information was known, it could help to clear the whole mess.

I feel really sorry for Key, it must be so difficult. T.T (But dont get me wrong, I really love to read such fanfics, where Key has hard time to deal with his problems and you are doing great job!).
I am glad that Key didnt keep his emotion just for himself, that he also uncovered a little bit of his thoughts for s. His emotional breakdown in front them was kinda needed.
Onew2HeaRa #7
Chapter 1: yeobu!! nice stories..I love it!! Good Job Beb!!
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